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[fic: arashi] this eternal summer

Jun 02, 2010 20:59

[Title] this eternal summer
[Author] turtle_ai
[Disclaimer] I don't own Arashi, or Johnny's Ent. They do own my heart, however.
[Pairing] Sho/Ohno
[Rating] G
[Summary] Sho is the only one who sees it.
[Notes] You know that moment when you feel depressed, kind of, and you want to spend it all writing? This is what happened. Words flow smoother, and it's written ( Read more... )

#oneshot, rating: g, --fandom: arashi, pairing: sho/ohno

Comments 49

demonsanada June 3 2010, 01:28:28 UTC

that was so cute... i like it :)

turtle_ai June 3 2010, 01:48:47 UTC

Thank you for reading n__n

narusaku4vr June 3 2010, 01:34:07 UTC

Awww!!! This was sweet, simple, free flowing and comforting.

"Sho-chan. I think I might be in love with you."

He breathed quietly for a moment, simply digesting that abrupt declaration. To his surprise, it didn't feel half as awkward as he thought that it might have.

"I'm sorry I'm late," Sho answered at last.

"Hm?"

"It took me a few hundred years, but I'm here at last."

He could hear Ohno smiling over the phone.

- my favorite lines.

Thanks for sharing

turtle_ai June 3 2010, 01:49:04 UTC

Thank you for reading~ n__n

sunnydreams416 June 3 2010, 01:35:03 UTC

The ending was so much ♥ I liked it very much =)

turtle_ai June 3 2010, 01:49:18 UTC

Thank you n__n

tonieboo0013 June 3 2010, 01:42:53 UTC

That's so sweet! Sho being the prince to Ohno's sleeping beauty, it was just a little gem to read.

I really liked the soft atmosphere that most of it was written, giving it a cloudy/hazy feeling, and then when Ohno "woke up" you wrote everything more literal with a little more bounce in its step, I suppose.

Sorry, it sounds really odd to say it out loud, but I'm hoping you know what I'm trying to say?

Thanks so much for sharing!

turtle_ai June 3 2010, 01:49:47 UTC

I understand, no worries~. n__n Thank you ♥

cris_kanaschiro June 3 2010, 01:47:07 UTC

I hope you're feeling better, pet. Don't be sad. :D

It's Yama Pair... sweet, peaceful and lovely Yama Pair! ♥♥♥
Can't send you enough hearts. :(

This is beautiful, really. Thank you so much for sharing!

turtle_ai June 3 2010, 01:53:27 UTC

I am~ :D It's just one of those times when I think too much about things and I get kind of... yeah. XD

♥♥♥ :DDD

cris_kanaschiro June 3 2010, 02:06:36 UTC

If you write beautiful fics when you're depressed... you should get depressed more often. XD
Kidding, you know that, right?
♥