Fic for violeteyedhair

[ketchupblood]

Title: One Way Trip
Rating: G
Wordcount: Just shy of 2,000
Request: Day Late Friend - Tezuka and Fuji run into each other years after they've lost touch. Fuji admits he was in love with Tezuka, Tezuka admits that he felt the same. Their respective girlfriends find them and come over. No happy ending. Lots of awkward smalltalk! ♥
Summary: ...Not

Comments

[a1y_puff]

Ouch... that hurts...
It's sad that Tezuka didn't play tennis anymore, and instead, Fuji was the one to conquer the courts.
and it somewhat hurt when Fuji just suddenly said "I used to love you" in the middle of their conversations in that casual tone while I think what he wanted to say was "I love you, even now" T_T
that ending was also quit agonizing T_T

[ketchupblood]

=| I know. But it's what she asked for... *quietly shifts the blame*

*is subtle like that*

[paranoid_fridge]

*sob*
That was sad, but beautifully written. I really liked the way they interacted with each other - not really uncomfortable, but still somewhat stilted.
And the way the fought to uphold their respective facades of 'I used to...' just made me melt away.
(*cough and I also rather liked that the girlfriends didn't get a lot of screentime cough*)
On one hand I kinda want to beg you for a sequel (including the affair that brings them together in the end), on the other hand, even though the ending is sad, it rather fits.
Thanks anyways *sniff*

[ketchupblood]

I'm glad you liked that! That was the exact interaction I was going for, so I'm really glad it got through. :D

I'm not sure if I could, though, because the request was specific in no happy endings and I think a sequel counts as a happy ending. :(

*gives you a tissue*

[decollement]

Oh, Fuji. INSERT SADFACE. My functional productivity just shot itself in the head.

[ketchupblood]

*patpat* I'm sorry. :( I didn't mean to?

[allalabeth_san]

Poor boys. They love each other still. Even with Mika and the Girlfriend. And they will always think about "if".

I need to think that right now.

I like it very much ^_^

[ketchupblood]

Yeah, I know. I know. *snugs them*

I'm glad you liked it!

[violeteyedhair]

Waaaah! That was exactly what I wanted! I started trying to write the idea myself once and I think my Fuji also said "I used to love you, you know," too, so when I got to that I got REALLY excited. ♥

I'm sorry I didn't read it sooner! I moved unexpectedly into an apartment with no internet - this is my first time going online since the end of June. ;o; *currently using library internet*

This has made me so happy. I am going to print it so that I can reread it at times when there are no internet (read: always).

[ketchupblood]

I'm so glad you liked it! *blushes* Like, I'm really, really, REALLY glad you like it.

And it sucks about your internet. *hugs*