Oh wow. This is just as gorgeous and beautiful as your first chapter. I think, more than anything, I love how Fuji treats Tezuka when he thinks he's the Duke and how he's trying to do what he feels he should and trying to just seduce him, and expecting to just be fucked or whatever it is he had planned on doing, and then Tezuka just stands away. It's a beautiful moment and I love how he turns the conversation away from, "Here, let me make you feel good" to "I hate society's conventions and expectations." It brings their whole relationship above just lust, which is something that I barely ever see in fics or books or just stories anymore.
Hehe, thanks a lot. ^^ I was kinda wondering what to do with that scene because Tezuka seemed unlikely to spontaneously recite poetry. The entire thing about 'societies conventions' did fit in; though it did (in my opinion) kill the mood somewhat. So I'm really, really glad you liked it. And while smut is a nice read from time to time - it's not what the movie is about. ^^
*mouth drops* Beautiful... argh. I love it. The way you describe it feels like they belong to each other. I really love the every sentence you put it in, and... omg gorgeous. I've found one small error though ^^;; 'Enchantée, mon cherie' It should be 'Enchanté, ma chérie'. I speak french everyday, so I sort of know... >__<
Thanks a lot !!! And I admit I fail at french - but I edited that phrase to "enchanté, mon chéri" -which I hope is correct as Atobe actually knows that Fuji is male. *maybesomethingIlearnedinschoolstuck* ^^;
Next chapter... egh, next Monday probably. Hope that's still okay.^^
Oh. Right. He's a guy. ARGH! I fail as a fangirl to remember Fuji is a DUDE!! GOMENASAI!! >____< (I blame your fic for being too-beautifully described!)
Next monday! *Stabs self* Here, if I die, time flows faster. Be sure to revive me next monday!
Got to love cross dressing Fuji :D. Seems Tezuka is very enchanted, although it'll be interesting to see how he reacts with the Duke getting all touchy feelly with Fuji ^^;;;
Thank you! Hehe, I like imagining Fuji in a dress very, very much. And of course, Tezuka can't help but falling for him hard like that. ^_____^ Next part should be up next Monday. ^^
*still gawking at the sudden appearance of the group* they shocked me! in a good way..:D it looks like they appear to save tezuka! XD and they KISS! yeshhh!love at the first sight and the first kiss! *squealing incoherently* did i mention that i love this story very very much? thank you for sharing this wonderful fic! ^^
Thank you for reading. ^^ Well, part of the group had of course been curious as to what will transpire in the elephant (or, as Inui would put it "to collect data"). And since they're nice they just jumped in to save their latest member. ^____^
"That small body seemed to fit perfectly against his, and the peaceful sensation spreading through his mind only proved his earlier words - love is not about a gender; but about a person. And Fuji - so beautiful and sharp-minded - was all and more than he could ever ask for."
One of the many excerpts I love in this chapter...you have such beautiful words and wow...the emotions that exude from your creative words overwhelms me beyond description.
I so look forward to the next installment... *bows* thank you so much for sharing your wonderful work!
I thank you for the compliments. *bows* And I don't know whether or not I fail at descriptions (more often then not I write at times when I'm more asleep than awake...), but I'm glad if the scenes come across as I want them to. ^__^ Hope you'll still like the next installment.
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I was kinda wondering what to do with that scene because Tezuka seemed unlikely to spontaneously recite poetry. The entire thing about 'societies conventions' did fit in; though it did (in my opinion) kill the mood somewhat.
So I'm really, really glad you liked it.
And while smut is a nice read from time to time - it's not what the movie is about. ^^
Btw, can I friend you?
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And of course you can add me! :D
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The way you describe it feels like they belong to each other. I really love the every sentence you put it in, and... omg gorgeous. I've found one small error though ^^;;
'Enchantée, mon cherie' It should be 'Enchanté, ma chérie'. I speak french everyday, so I sort of know... >__<
Next. Chappie. NOW. XD I. Command.
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And I admit I fail at french - but I edited that phrase to "enchanté, mon chéri" -which I hope is correct as Atobe actually knows that Fuji is male.
*maybesomethingIlearnedinschoolstuck* ^^;
Next chapter... egh, next Monday probably. Hope that's still okay.^^
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ARGH! I fail as a fangirl to remember Fuji is a DUDE!! GOMENASAI!! >____< (I blame your fic for being too-beautifully described!)
Next monday! *Stabs self* Here, if I die, time flows faster. Be sure to revive me next monday!
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... even if it's Wednesday by now. ^^; (please feel free to kill me now)
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Can't wait for the next part ^^
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Hehe, I like imagining Fuji in a dress very, very much. And of course, Tezuka can't help but falling for him hard like that. ^_____^ Next part should be up next Monday. ^^
Glad you liked it!
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they shocked me! in a good way..:D it looks like they appear to save tezuka! XD
and they KISS! yeshhh!love at the first sight and the first kiss! *squealing incoherently*
did i mention that i love this story very very much?
thank you for sharing this wonderful fic! ^^
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Well, part of the group had of course been curious as to what will transpire in the elephant (or, as Inui would put it "to collect data"). And since they're nice they just jumped in to save their latest member. ^____^
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One of the many excerpts I love in this chapter...you have such beautiful words and wow...the emotions that exude from your creative words overwhelms me beyond description.
I so look forward to the next installment... *bows* thank you so much for sharing your wonderful work!
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And I don't know whether or not I fail at descriptions (more often then not I write at times when I'm more asleep than awake...), but I'm glad if the scenes come across as I want them to. ^__^
Hope you'll still like the next installment.
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