Thanks for reading. ... and though it might be strange to admit, but writing that scene with Fuji being cruel went far easier than expected. But the ending... the ending - I shall only say I'll stick to the movie.
T___T!! Poor Fuji!! Loved how this chapter ended, even with all the angst.
I really like how you depicted Atobe. Especially at the start after that day after of that incident. You don't portray him as some evil bastard. I feel he truly cares for Fuji. But just not in the right way ^^;;. A little too possessively. But then again, Tezuka also feels rather possessive of Fuji in his own way too.
Oh dear. This is going to be a tragedy, isn't it? I just looked up Moulin Rouge and this is gonna be hella depressing, especially after you've developed them so much.
... I'm afraid I'll have to confirm your suspicions. While I changed some details concerning the plotline, the ending remains. I still hope you'll like it. Thanks for reading! ^^
Uhhh... I don't really mean to make anybody cry, but somehow I can't seem to help myself - I just love writing angst and drama *sweatsdrops*. Anyways, I hope you don't mind the wait and thanks a lot for reading!
This is so heart wrenching. Either Fuji must be an extremely good actor since even Tezuka couldn't see through Fuji's act with his piercing eyes, or Tezuka was too blind to see through it due to his broken heart. It's very sad either way.
By the way, I'm sorry for misunderstanding the story last time. Sometimes I would be trapped in some particular lines and forget about any other lines entirely. Hope you don't mind me. ^^;
A very impressive piece of writing, thank you very much! :)
Thank you very much for reading. ^^ And - as one of my teachers used to say - if you've got a line to proof your interpretation there is no such a thing as a misunderstanding. ^______^ More of Tezuka and Fuji and the aftermath of their confrontation to come soon - and we'll see whether or not Tezuka manages to see through things in time.
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Fuji must be hell a good actor, because if I was in his place I think I'd just start crying in the middle of it. TT___TT
I love this. I need to see the ending! I'll be waiting so impatiently for next chapter!
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... and though it might be strange to admit, but writing that scene with Fuji being cruel went far easier than expected. But the ending... the ending - I shall only say I'll stick to the movie.
Yes. And the ending shall be up on Sunday. ^^
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I really like how you depicted Atobe. Especially at the start after that day after of that incident. You don't portray him as some evil bastard. I feel he truly cares for Fuji. But just not in the right way ^^;;. A little too possessively. But then again, Tezuka also feels rather possessive of Fuji in his own way too.
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^.
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Thank you very much for reading!
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Very nicely written, though.
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Thanks for reading! ^^
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Please post soon...adding this fic series to my memories!
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By the way, I'm sorry for misunderstanding the story last time. Sometimes I would be trapped in some particular lines and forget about any other lines entirely. Hope you don't mind me. ^^;
A very impressive piece of writing, thank you very much! :)
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And - as one of my teachers used to say - if you've got a line to proof your interpretation there is no such a thing as a misunderstanding. ^______^
More of Tezuka and Fuji and the aftermath of their confrontation to come soon - and we'll see whether or not Tezuka manages to see through things in time.
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