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Sep 07, 2008 14:39

Pairing: TezuFuji (main), one-sided AtoFuji; other canon pairings
Prompter: decollement
Prompt: Tezuka/ Fuji (and the rest of Seigaku, I suppose. Bonus points if Hyotei is involved somewhere) in a Moulin Rouge AU.
Wordcount: ~ 6700
Genre: Drama, Romance
Summary: Finale. Tezuka gets dragged back to the Moulin Rouge for the premier and things play out ( Read more... )

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chibikaoruchan September 7 2008, 19:36:15 UTC
I'm too shocked to cry. But really, this series broke my heart. I... Every single description, Fuji's every single act and Tezuka... Everything took my breath away.

This series... I have no words. It's beyond gorgeous, and it will definitely go to my memories.

Damn. I'm starting to cry.
Really, when I will make some sense I might be able to tell you how much this is amazing, darling. For now...

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paranoid_fridge September 11 2008, 17:52:47 UTC
Thanks sooooo much. Wouldn't know where I'd be without you. Honestly. *hugs*
And while it's a not quite a good thing, somehow it should be a good sign if a death fic makes a reader cry... Somehow at least. ... ^___~

I do have some ramblings, concerning the characters, the storyline and the rest of the world...
http://paranoid-fridge.livejournal.com/13839.html#cutid1 But really, it's ramblings.

Anways, Thanks for reading! And supporting! And everything else too! ^_____^

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petapepy September 7 2008, 20:51:11 UTC
Even though I knew how it would end, it was still very sad.

Congrats. I really enjoyed reading this ^^.

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paranoid_fridge September 11 2008, 17:54:55 UTC
Makes me glad to hear you enjoyed reading.

I shall admit I temporarily contemplated changing it to a happy-end fic... But that wouldn't have worked for quite a lot of reasons, so I picked some nice, kitschy music and wrote those very, very sappy last scenes. (and had a great lot of fun doing so!!!) ^^

Thanks for reading.

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lovefujitez September 7 2008, 21:08:41 UTC
"Without knowing anymore why there were tears slipping down his face, Tezuka leaned forward, heart trembling the moment he found Fuji’s beautiful blue eyes meeting his. The actor practically flew in Tezuka’s arms - too dizzy to walk straight or even hold himself upright anymore."

I will be rambling away and I will just sound really incoherent, (wipes tears)
all I can say - I love you for writing this fic series!

rans away to cry some more.

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paranoid_fridge September 11 2008, 18:00:22 UTC
Thank you for reading and liking. ^^

I had quite some fun (as well as some headaches) writing this fic ... and believe me, incoherent rambling is something I also did quite a lot. (Mostly in my head, though) With all the questions of "Satine attempts to seduce Christian who saves the day by making up a love song" - how to make (especially) Tezuka and Fuji act along without making them ooc... and so on and so forth. But it was fun. And deadlines (even extended ones - make me finish stories)
^_^

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ketchupblood September 8 2008, 01:12:07 UTC
I admit that I put off reading this for a while because, you know, TRAGEDY. And it was tragic, especially because it could all have been so easily avoided and there were two men who loved the idiot who could have saved him, yet he wouldn't let either of them because they're all idiots. Though I do think that Atobe is significantly less idiotic than the rest of them--he, at least, had no pretensions of being something he wasn't.

I love how you ended it and I love how you wrote this whole thing and DAMMIT, they're all idiots and ;_______;

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paranoid_fridge September 11 2008, 18:04:50 UTC
Um, yes. Tragedy. (I absolutely love writing it; because writing resolutions needs time and a lot of aspects to watch out for and, well, having your main chara die just finishes things effectively - erm, NO, I was very, very sad to make Fuji die.)

But you're absolutely right about them being idiots. They are, but I like them like that quite a lot.

Thanks for reading, ne ^^

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regret_dreams September 9 2008, 13:02:36 UTC
I originally started reading the fic at ff.net because I was bored, and I didnt realize till the fourth part that this was tragic..and..now..I am just lost for words..everything was flowing so well..even the end..I ..I had to read the last part twice thrice to realize that Fuji past away in Tezuka's arms..right where he belonged..

Oh god, I will be thinking about this fic for days now..

Beautiful writing! ...........

I am seriously lost for words..damn it, the entire ending could have changed if not for their damn MAN pride, but then it wouldnt be such a good fic..then..and..Oh damn, wasnt there a quote on how angst and tragedy are much more beautiful than happy endings..

I am rambling on, and now I need to go read some nice fluff..but I can bet anything, I still will be thinking of this series..

Thank you.

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paranoid_fridge September 11 2008, 18:09:18 UTC
I hope you found nice fluff in the mean time. ^^
And well, the tragedy was somewhat preordained by the movie and giving that fic a happy end would have made it necessary to a.) get Fuji cured b.) resolve the entire situation with Atobe c.)find a way to have Tezuka and Fuji get their happily ever after (and what might have occured with Tezuka's family). So well, actually, I more or less had it far easier. ^_^

Thank you very much for reading!

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