The benefits of modern dentistry [Lewis fic] G, ~3k words

[cactusonastair]

Title: The benefits of modern dentistry
Author: cactusonastair
Characters/Pairing: pre-Lewis/Hathaway
Rating: G
Wordcount: ~3K
Spoilers: For s6e4 "The Indelible Stain"
Warnings: None, except that this is unedited, un-betaed, and un-Britpicked!
Summary: Robbie Lewis discovers that the benefits of modern dentistry can reach pretty far...
Notes: Written for lewis_challenge's

Comments

[tetsubinatu]

Postman Pat! James' grin at Lewis being a one-woman man! :) Thank you.

[cactusonastair]

Heh, thank *you*! I'm glad you liked it!

[kat_lair]

Aww this left me with a smile on my face. Adorable and very in character, loved the subtle shift in the relationship. Well done!

[cactusonastair]

Thank you very much! So glad it brought a smile!

[grey853]

I liked it quite a lot. You've got the voices down and I enjoyed the banter. Thanks.

[cactusonastair]

Thank you, I'm glad you found the voices in order!

[seren_bach]

I really enjoyed this, loved the banter and James setting Lewis up with the whole kid's dentist thing (even if he is not so above it all himself!) and Lewis's active concern about James is just lovely to read. I really hope you add to this, I would love to read more! :-)

[cactusonastair]

Thanks so much for the feedback and encouragement. I'll see about a sequel :-)

[mrs_sweetpeach]

Sequel?! Yay!

Also, please go back and reread lamardeuse's comment as she said everything I wanted to say.

Nicely done and now I'm looking forward to the next part of the story!

[cactusonastair]

Thank you very much. Will do my best! :-)

[woldy]

Very sweet!

[cactusonastair]

I know, writing this I almost felt like *I'd* have to visit the dentist soon...