[Fiction] Kurotsuki [Reita x Ruki] - Chapter 4

[cadaver_maxx]

Title: Kurotsuki

Chapter: 4/??

Author: cadaver_maxx

Genre: AU, Police

Warnings: (for entire story) violence, smut, drugs, alcohol, language

Rating: NC-17 (overall)

Pairing(s): Reita x Ruki (main) / Aoi x Uruha / Tora x Saga / Kai x Hiroto / Kaoru x Die

Band(s): The Gazette, Alice Nine, Dir en Grey

Disclaimer: Let’s pretend I do own them.

Comments

[achii3gu]

finally uruha became aoi's lover~

i'm happy for 'em~

[cadaver_maxx]

^^

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!

[thevamprei]

I read this in one go, and I really have to say Kudos to you. You got my attention from "yakuza mastermind".
This really is nicely written (except for a few typos, sorry to say). I love your descriptions and the action in it.
Also, the way you portrayed Ruki is amazing! I love that, sometimes, he still finds the strength to smile and can still see the good in people.
Cheers! Looking forward to more.

[cadaver_maxx]

Thank you, my dear! More will come soon.
Your comment really meant a lot to me since I find the way I write action kind of hasty and boring.
Typos... yeah. I lack the patience to re-read what I write. Sorry about that. Hope they're not bothersome, though.

XoXo,
Maxxie

[thevamprei]

Not at all. Now I feel like a bitch for pointing them out, lol.
Oh and I have to say: Tora and Saga are such an adorable couple. I really like how much they love eachother and how Saga understands everything Tora does, but also goes behind him to do his own stuff. If you get it... DId you get it? Good.
Keep it up, Maxxie.

BTW. I'm Rei. Pleased to meet you

[cadaver_maxx]

Oh, FINALLY! Someone mentions Tora and Saga. I know, aren't they cute?? I want a boyfriend like Saga. Yeah, if I'd be as awesome as Tora -__-'
And yeah, I got what you said. Kudos for chaotic thinking. Has Kouyou been visiting you as well, my dear? *laughs*
Aww, don't feel like a bitch. It's ok!

XoXo,
Maxxie

[sakura_no_zero]

Hey there, that was great! I loooooooved the scene with Aoi and Kouyou! <3 So so lovely! And Kai and Hiroto! It seems like you're taking things slow between them, I'm glad! Reading your update just made my day, I'm gonna take it as a early birthday present^^

Hope you're feeling better >___< how about your exams? I'm still detremined to take mine... but then, it's still more than 3 weeks to go.... take care!

[cadaver_maxx]

Had one today and I'm pretty sure I'm passing it.

I'm really glad you liked this chapter! It took me a whole lot of restraint not to take things too far, but I'm glad I didn't. I'm kind of proud of it myself.

[sakura_no_zero]

yay for the exam! glad you did well!

Looking forward to the next chapter, off to work now! Bye bye!

[dani_25]

Kai/Hiroto???? <3

Aoi/Uru ^_______^ <33333

But Ruru is alone T_T

Thankisses Maxxie!

[cadaver_maxx]

poor Ruru >_>'

OMG Your profile picture is fab! Gotta love Reita the creeper!

No, thank YOU! *gives cookies*

XoXo,
Maxxie

[shihoku_miko]

Ruki needs more love! *runs and hugs him*
But I;m happy for Aoi&Uruha <33 Finally Uru made a move! XD

And as for Tora and Saga... (<3.<3) I just love their love <3

Just one question: can I have Kai? XDDD *hides* I know Hiroto wants him, but... *bats eyelashes*

And seriously Maxxie, you should become a mystery novel writer <333
ILU! <3

M~~

[cadaver_maxx]

No! You can't have Kai! *smacks you*
*stomps over back to his chair*

I should write the scripts for CSI, seeing as my new chapter is made of such awesome.

ILU2, honey.
Maxxie.

[shihoku_miko]

But but but! *pouts as she rubs where she was hit*
*walks over to you and hugs you* I won't take him XD but I still want him <3

You should <3 You rock, Maxxie dear <3 ^_^

M~~

[cadaver_maxx]

Heeehh hope I didn't smack you that hard o.o
*chuckles* You can have him after Kurotsuki is over xDD

Love you!
Maxxie