[Fiction] Red Angels [Atsushi x Tatsurou] - Oneshot

Jul 18, 2011 22:25

The key in the ignition turned and two engines purred, making the steel beasts vibrate and hit the pairs of thighs that straddled each of them. A blonde with long hair stepped between them, pulling her scarf from her neck and holding it up
“Ready…”
The engines forced as handle-bars turned.
“Steady…”
The two riders bending in unison, getting their ( Read more... )

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shihoku_miko July 18 2011, 19:58:02 UTC
Otsukarechaaaaa~~n ^_^ *throws confetti*
Besides the fact that I loved the plot, I like the way it turned out *grin*

Luv ya, Maxxie honey ♥

Bad-ass bike fics rule *cool*

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hisashiatsitoll July 19 2011, 02:24:15 UTC
cookies and cake i really luved this XD wish there were more like it =^^=

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cadaver_maxx August 7 2011, 06:30:48 UTC
Glad!

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noyatasya July 21 2011, 20:09:25 UTC
Bike fics, well there's something new (well, for me it is). I liked it though~ Kinda weird to see Atsushi getting at Tatsurou within hours after meeting, but then again, it's fanfic, so, hooray for da smut =D

“You beat the crap out of my men”
“They beat the crap out of my man” he replied matter-of-factly.
“They be-… man... wha- what?”

this part made me chuckle ;) I could totally imagine him saying it.

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buriedinheart July 26 2011, 15:19:01 UTC
this was amazing nice to read <3 loved it, great job as always!

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gnrbu August 6 2011, 23:36:51 UTC
How come no one ever thought of a bike-fic before this? It's such a perfect setting. :D I love how you highlighted the generation gap, though Tatsurou never was quite as much of a rookie that Atsushi took him for.

Shame on his crew for not respecting their elders - but then, isn't respecting elders one of those norms of the society bikers are not supposed to have respect for? ;D

Interestingly, I was way more intrigued by the biker setting than the lemon - which was good nevertheless.

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cadaver_maxx August 7 2011, 06:30:22 UTC
I think it depends on what elders. If it's your "senpai" as in an older biker, yes, you should respect them. I think...I wouldn't know I'm not a biker and neither is my co-writer :D
I'm actually a pretty lame dork.

Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm really glad you like it! I promise there's more to come, so stay tuned.

XoXo,
Maxxie

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