"The Fields of Hibernia" First Full Release

Jun 13, 2005 02:34

Alright everyone, here is the first full draft of Cadwgawn's background, "The Fields of Hibernia." Please, rip it the hell to shreads. I beg you to do so, in order to help me.

New Text is in blueScenes added: "A Return to the Battlefield" and "The Same Old New Beginings ( Read more... )

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trueikon June 14 2005, 08:09:03 UTC
Yeah...as an afterthought.

How the heck is he firing a bow with no depth perception?

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cadwgawn June 14 2005, 12:58:57 UTC
I hadn't thought about it at the time. I suppose that with his training (which had been immense before his eye was ruined) he could discern what angles were needed to get a proper arc to attack someone. If he was at some point a master archer, this is definately possible. Then, take a look at the distances involved; he has set his trap perfectly, and having one eye, while ruining his depth of field-ness, especially up close, won't matter as much at distance, especially considering that he wasn't aiming for anyone in particular, just the mass of the charging troops as a signal for everyone else to fire.

*Shrug*

I should also go back and change all the 'eyes' to 'eye'

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Are there any other housellama June 23 2005, 04:22:19 UTC
Major players in House Balor in play? I'd love to get more Balors involved, and more tie-ins for House Dougal. I'd like to see that particular house rivalry revived.

-Tug

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