Finally some other words

[caelumi]

But not the pr0n leidy wanted, for this I am sorry.

:: Ryan Lochte/Michael Phelps, US Men's Swimming, (hard)G. Unbeta'ed.

Comments

[datenshiblue]

*purrs*

I like. The sensory descriptions are clear, and the circling of the prose works. Each section reveals another facet of Ryan.

Nicely done.

[lost__emotions]

Beautifully written :)

PS. Your mood theme is rad! ;)

[caelumi]

Thanks!

And LOL, thanks! TMNT represent! ^_^;;

[nilla]

Sometimes diving into the pool was like soaring off the edge of the world-for a little while he was weightless, flying, with only the touch of the wall to anchor him down to reality.

[...]

The skin was smooth, and warm, and his neck arched and his hips rocked and then he testing ever-expanding boundaries. There was just enough gravity with long arms around him to keep him steady and his name was written by fingertips through sweat so he never forgot who he was.
You write the prettiest, most descriptive stuff :) *giggles* Also, I changed my lj name... So add me, bitch! :D

[caelumi]

Yous added!

And thanks. *smooshes*

[enigmalea]

I'm awful about commenting, but I've actually got a second. I think I've read everything you've posted to olympic_slash that was phelps/lochte related, and I just wanted to say... it's all amazing. I love your description and how much attention you pay to the five senses.

[caelumi]

Thank you!!! You're totally forgiven for all the times that you didn't comment. ~_^

[bbmrebel]

nice comparisons - nice lead into something else?

[caelumi]

Eventually, yes. ^_^