Comments | caelumi: FIC : Tie My Hands (4) : Swim Slash : NC17 (Phelps/Lochte)

caelumi

FIC : Tie My Hands (4) : Swim Slash : NC17 (Phelps/Lochte)

Dec 07, 2008 17:20

Title: Tie My Hands (4/?)
Pair: Phelps/Lochte
Rating: nc17 for the smutty goodness
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.

THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS

Tie My Hands, Part 1: When Hilary Wants To Throw the Calender Away.
Tie My Hands, Part 2: When Michael ( Read more... )

swimmer slash, tie my hands

Comments 36

24ko December 8 2008, 06:52:15 UTC

This keeps getting better and better! That last part had me speechless - I love, love, love how descriptive your writing is! So excited for the next part. :)

caelumi December 11 2008, 23:33:53 UTC

Thank you!! #^_^# Glad you're still enjoying it, hehe.

ealanta December 8 2008, 06:58:34 UTC

loved this chapter.
seriously its so well written! its one of the best stories ive read in a while...
<33333

caelumi December 11 2008, 23:37:48 UTC

Gonna give me a big head ^_^ But thank you! <33333

tragycbeauty December 8 2008, 07:07:48 UTC

Absolutely heartbreaking.
I love this story and can't wait for the next part.

caelumi December 11 2008, 23:42:38 UTC

Totally gonna get worse before it gets better, because I'm such a whore for angst. ... And, your icon makes me want to write weird AP/IC Santa!porn, oh my. ^^

tragycbeauty December 12 2008, 03:23:58 UTC

I support the writing of any holiday-themed Crocker/Peirsol fic wholeheartedly! They don't get nearly enough love, in my opinion.

lenaorgana December 9 2008, 04:51:25 UTC

Reading this during a study break from studying...and now I'm just so down, I don't think I can go back to reviewing notes! This story is so good and I can't wait for the next chapter, especially since Michael's decided he doesn't need Ryan anymore.

caelumi December 12 2008, 00:34:23 UTC

lenaorgana December 12 2008, 00:46:42 UTC

Oh. I just meant broken heart, because that's how this chapter left me feeling (both for myself and Ryan).

caelumi December 12 2008, 00:54:02 UTC

Awwwwwww *tapes that little heart back together again. in five chapters or so.*

halfshellvenus December 9 2008, 08:01:55 UTC

I can't help thinking that poor Ryan's still figuring out what happened while Michael is five states away still talking himself through the resolve to end it.

And I love that with this writing, the reminder of Ryan's love for Michael is so vivid in this chapter where Ryan isn't even present, but all of the reminders of him are.

caelumi December 12 2008, 00:36:38 UTC

*nod* I tend to think that Ryan is a very absent-minded sort of positive, and in this case it's left him very behind the times. Thank you for the wonderful comments. <3