Ficlet : Santa Baby : MP/RL (R)

[caelumi]

"Santa Baby"--9 days to Christmas

:: Michael Phelps/Ryan Lochte, US Swimming, R

((...So... excuses... ^_^ An old friend came into town last night and we had to go out. And drink. >.> I mean, we were helping out the economy! *ahem* Sorry this is a day late, heh.))

Comments

[lenaorgana]

I can so, so imagine Ryan hiding mistletoe everywhere, making Michael go crazy. This is so cute and very much worth the wait. :)

[caelumi]

^_____^ Thank you!

[smellyleaf]

OH RYAN.

I ADORED THIS. SO MUCH. ~MISTLETOE FETISH?~

And I'm not sure if this is on purpose or not, but when Ryan says ""Su spacos es mi spacos." he is using the ustedes version of 'you,' something you would only say when speaking to someone older or someone who demands respect, like a boss. If you were being casual, you would just say "Tu spacos es mi spacos."

Sorry for my spanish speech, I just thought you might like to know (unless it was intentional, in which case, sorry to be annoying). hahaha

[caelumi]

... Uh. This is me. I took French in high school and Latin and Japanese in college, so... not so updated on the Spanish. (Though my brother in law is fluent, ha!)

Totally unintentional. ^_^ I was just thinking of the phrase "mi casa es su casa," and switched it around to make it fit. It is Ryan, so I think he can pull off the space-cadetness.

*ties Mistletoe in your hair*

[smellyleaf]

haha, the only foreign language I've ever taken is Spanish. You're so much more impressive than me. XD

True. Ryan can sort of pull off anything

[wendies]

LOL! This made me laugh so hard "That makes you sound like a pedophile!" haha it was sooo cute!!! And hott ;)

[leici]

This was awesome! I love how you set it up and then had Michael (and us readers) constantly on the look out for more mistletoe. I really like how playful Ryan is, and how you write Michael's inner voice. Fantastic, as always. *happy sigh*

[azewewish]

I'm sorry, but the inner football geek in me is laughing my ASS off at the idea that this year's Jaguars would get anywhere near the endzone against the Ravens' defense.

Of course, I can totally hear Michael & Ryan arguing that exact same point in my head. *g*

[caelumi]

Right?? HAHA. I'm glad someone appreciated that! I'm a Baltimore native--and pretty proud of the Ravens this year. But then again, it IS Madden. And I'm anti-EA. Or maybe I just think Michael sucks at it...

LOL. I'm glad ya liked it. ^_^ <3333