Comments | caelumi: FIC : Tie My Hands (8) : Swimmer Slash : pg13 (Phelps/Lochte)

caelumi

FIC : Tie My Hands (8) : Swimmer Slash : pg13 (Phelps/Lochte)

Feb 08, 2009 12:09

Title: Tie My Hands (8/?)
Pair: Phelps/Lochte
Rating: pg13 (...as the angst goes up, the porn goes down...)
Summary: Michael Phelps and Ryan Lochte? They were the best worst-kept secret of the swimming world. And Michael didn't like it.

THIS IS A WORK IN PROGRESS

Tie My Hands, Part 1: When Hilary Wants To Throw the Calender Away.
Tie My Hands, ( Read more... )

swimmer slash, tie my hands

Comments 38

smellyleaf February 8 2009, 20:32:31 UTC

*is nearly incoherent ( ... )

caelumi February 11 2009, 00:20:50 UTC

<33333 LOL! I hope my fic doesn't kill you. Though I can't make any promises about the state of Ryan's heart. I just write 'em. ^_^

annadraper February 8 2009, 22:59:38 UTC

OH MY GOD!!!!!!! I can't believe I have to wait another week for the next chapter. Do we really have tooooo? /five year old whine

That was so fucking amazing... so many things to love about it: the confrontation with Bob; Mike losing the race; the bread/paper/laughing sex; the little details in the background describing just how couple-y they've been for two years; the boys circling around Ryan; the break up... you did it all SO well!

Debbie needs to slap some sense into her son ASAP.

caelumi February 11 2009, 00:27:25 UTC

HAHAHA, I totally agree with you on the last. And I have to confess, I love putting Mike and Bob in fights. ^_^

So thank you! *hugs the five year-old* Really glad you liked it.

joylesseyes February 8 2009, 23:49:03 UTC

This is far too good to be fan fiction.

caelumi February 11 2009, 00:28:17 UTC

##^____^## That makes me very, very happy. Thank you.

lenaorgana February 9 2009, 00:24:20 UTC

I've been reading snippets of this all afternoon as a "reward" for writing a paper and GOD, was this chapter motivation to write!

The beginning wasn't happy per se, but it left me feeling warm and fuzzy inside and that's when I suspected something horribly sad at the end. So I began to brace myself. Between the "awws" I thought when Ian and Michael talked to the desire to hug Jones, Grevers, the Vanderkaays and GWG when they kept checking up to Ryan in the bleachers (and Ryan too, of course <3). Michael's telling Bob off was so humorous that I laughed a bit too loudly and bothered some people in the library (hey, midterm week is over; it's okay). What I felt when Ryan beat Michael is probably best described as glee - what can I say, I have no shame admitting I'm a Reezy girl (who also loves her some Michael). But that jubilation was short lived as that was a huge alarm for DANGER: Michael will not be happy and soon, neither will Ryan.

As much as my heart aches for Ryan, I also feel for Michael. For the pool to play such a huge part ( ... )

caelumi February 11 2009, 00:34:31 UTC

Darlin, are you always in the library?? LOL!

The idea of Michael in anger management classes cracks me up; it's too fun to write him throwing tantrums! Though you're right--he has to get his shit figured out. For the sake of my story I hope he does. -_-

And that's perfect. "I'm a Reezy girl (who also loves her some Michael)."

ivebeenburgled February 9 2009, 02:29:29 UTC

BB. My god. I have tears in my eyes. I NEVER CRY BC OF FIC, OKAY? This is a first. I could not even leave a good comment if I tried.

Ryaaaaaaaaaaaaaan. My heart, my poor heart. *makes grabby hands* I will hug and cuddle Ryan and we will get Ben and Jerry's and make each other feel better.

And you need to fix this. Or I (and my heart) will hunt you down, alright?

caelumi February 11 2009, 00:38:31 UTC

WAHOO! I'm sorry I made you teary (*and gives tissues!*) but I'm a little gleeful too, hehehe. That's such a compliment! ^____^ <3333

I will totally try to fix it! I don't need peeps (and their hearts) hunting me down. Nope.