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foibles_fables January 10 2010, 05:47:36 UTC
I LITERALLY READ THE FIRST TWO SENTENCES RIGHT NOW AND SCREECHED. Smoking!Mark, I love you!!!!!

okay back to reading...

....GAH.

That's all I can say right now! Can...can I come back and supplement this review tomorrow??

(BTW, that is a good GAH. It's pretty much an orgasmic GAH.)

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caer January 10 2010, 16:42:14 UTC
I love smoking!Mark too! I remembered having a convo with you and CP about all the things Mark could pick up during the Crossover and someone mentioned his scruff (too stressed to shave!) among other things (tattoo, smoking, piercing), so I just had to include it :D

GAH is an awesome thing to say. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it =)

ETA: Off to review yours!

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caer January 10 2010, 16:52:41 UTC
Aw, thanks ^^ I wasn't sure how the M/L shippers were going to take it, since Addison isn't exactly the most popular character with us/them. It's great you don't seem bothered by the M/A aspect! =D I'm glad you liked the update! The next part will be up in the evening, I think.

By the way, I keep meaning to say thank you for following the fic. You're the only outside traffic that's commenting, and I'm sure it's safe to say that all the writers that are a part of this, really appreciate it =) So, thank you!

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citron_presse January 10 2010, 09:54:09 UTC
This is AWESOME. Such gorgeous, pathological, sexy, dual-shipping, fucked up, well written, in character superbness.

Can I just quote this? “I wanted to thank you,” he says quietly, “for flying out on such short notice.” It might be me reading in too much (but I don't think so), but I think I've rarely read (heard in my head) such an apparently innocent line spoken so beautifully sleazily.

And, oh, the angst! And the smoking! *sighs*

Perfect.

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caer January 10 2010, 17:05:40 UTC
Well, it's all thanks to YOU for setting the tone for how Mark feels about Addison/Lexie so beautifully! =D This scene was in the works as soon as I read the line about Mark enjoying Addison's voice a little too much.

It's funny you should choose that line - it's the first thing that popped into my head about this scene :D I'm glad you liked it. And I'm SO happy you enjoyed the rest as well!

Also...ICON!! Smoking hot! &hearts

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caer January 10 2010, 17:13:21 UTC
Thank you! I LOVE messing with Mark ^^ Entirely too much fun.

Smoking!Mark is pretty hot, isn't he?! I look forward to your part! :D

P.S. addikat won't be able to go this round, so you'll be up after lumifan99.

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nursebadass January 11 2010, 02:43:24 UTC
Oh this is awesome. Mark smoking. That's kind of hot. Even if it is horrible for you.

I love the set up for Addison/Mark/Lexie. That was a great setup. Thank you for that. ♥

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caer January 12 2010, 02:34:10 UTC
You know, I HATE smoking with a *passion* but somehow ED makes it work?? It's fast becoming a part of my fanon, lol.

Setup credit really goes to citron_presse! I was just following her lead =)

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