Crimson [Sehun/Lu Han, Kai/Lu Han]

[youofthefuture]

Title: Crimson
Pairing: Sehun/Lu Han, Kai/Lu Han
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~4000
Disclaimer: I own nothing herein but the plot
Warning: Character death

Summary: Sehun and Jongin are more alike than Lu Han realizes.

Comments

[roughly_yours]

o_____O WHOA.
That was.... shocking. Like, really shocking. I love it.
The thing about these three starring in a fic is that Luhan is usually with Sehun and Jongin is just forever alone. I really like how Luhan chose Jongin this time around though (even if it was because Sehun left).

[youofthefuture]

I really like how Luhan chose Jongin this time around though (even if it was because Sehun left).
well lu han allows jongin into his life bc sehun left, but he falls in love with jongin on his own accord c:

eep thanks for reading!~

[burntsienna18]

oh ffffffffffffffff this is so good
oh my gahhhh
the writing was just... amazing. really, really, well-written. fccccckkkkk i don't know what to say. OTL
i actually liked the ending! it was just... basically everything was perfect.
i loved so many of the phrases/lines used here. like "His best friend, but nothing more. An angel, but not his." and "His love is destructive. All those touched by it find happiness, but also tragedy. Lu Han cannot give such selfish love. And yet, he cannot imagine a life without love."
i also liked how you wrote one paragraph in and then skipped back to previous scenes (ugh i'm not articulate at all please forgive me) and then went back to the first scene and continued from there. that was cool!
this is another one of the fics i'll be crying about because it's so good OTL
i wish i could write like you! lol >.<
i'll be memming this <3

[youofthefuture]

omg no i haven't even edited it yet laskdjf

actually i wasn't sure about adding in that paragraph again bc it'd be repetitive, but i'm glad you liked it!

eeEEPPP thank you for this too-nice comment ♥♥

[mayumi_san]

Omg let me be coherent before I post a fqing comment

Just know that I love you guh

[mayumi_san]

Okay I think sanity has come back to me

Just.. Gull I can't explain what I feel. This is just beautiful in this sad morbid way.

Also, you had me fooled there. I totally thought Jongin was the insane one, but it's actually Sehun and omg why did you kill KaiLu /sobs

And luhan choosing Jongin /sobs even more my soul has left me because LUKAI Guh
and Jongin was just so sweet and he's gotten out of the asylum in good faith? Like without pretending to be sane? Because Sehun you are just too creepy >.<

revive lukai please? /sobbing

[youofthefuture]

YESSS I ACTUALLY FOOLED YOU!? x)

omg after writing this, i've realized how fun it is to kill off characters (uh oh)

but if it makes you feel better, lu han wouldn't be happy anymore without jongin/kai in his life :c

thanks for reading~♥

[youofthefuture]

ahh your comment is so nice ♥

thank you so much ^~^

[zenithzinc]

oh. my. gosh. this gives me these feelings and the shivers to my spine. oh so brilliant. sorry can't give you a proper comment, i'm still carried away.

[youofthefuture]

Lol your comment is lovely~

thanks for reading :D