[fic] Eurydice (part 1)

[caffeine_buzz]

Title: Eurydice
Fandom: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle
Rating: T
Pairings/Warnings: KuroFai. Post-Tokyo, with some spoilers for Fai's past.
Summary: Every year, a festival is held to celebrate the passing of the Night of Change, when the sea goes dark and voices call from the land on the other side. And when Fai is called, Kurogane has no choice but

Comments

[kenarbes]

Wow, that was really different. I like it, a lot.

[may_unleashed]

This is really captivating.

The environment described, the fog and the voices and the points of light, it creates such a sad but meaningful scenario.

The title for this is perfect, and the narrative is brilliant.

*applause* The fandom is ecstatic to see you writing again.

I particularly like the stubborn nature of Kurogane, and how we can always rely on him to keep a level head. And among all those insults and thoughts in regards of Fai, it's still clear he worries and feels so much for him.

And Fai here is perfect in a twisted, broken sense. How emotionless he acts, and how he speaks to Syaoran! That part surprised me so much, in the good sense. It was a sad thing, but so realistic in terms of character development.

And Sakura and Mokona stringing those many stars...such a sweet but also sad touch.

I'm onto the second part now.