"Haunted Blood" (A Versailles-Philharmonic Quintet- Fanfiction)

[caketripper]

In his large, sparsely-furnished flat Hizaki sat idly atop his bed, basking in the late-afternoon sunlight which shone through the nearby glass door separating his room from the balcony. He lived alone here, suffering only occasional visits from the people he sold music with--Kamijou, Teru, Yuki and--... he glanced longingly at the shapely glass

Comments

[dakishimeru666]

I'll be very honest with you xD wether you like it or not but truly this is the worst piece of writing i've ever read... its a damn discrace to the fandom and if you like this, I advice you to get a psychiatrist XD

If Kamijo ever finds this you're so doomed xD

[xlovelesslukax]

Worst? In the sense that you do not approve of it's theme, I presume, for otherwise, the real shame to the fandom lies in the assembly-line produced Reita/Ruki fics; perhaps you are illiterate if you consider it o be a bad piece of writing, because whether you like the theme or not the writing as such is far beyond the spheres of most fanfics in terms of writing. You obviously lack appreciation of morbid humour, but that is the sort of vapidity one has come to accept from fans of something as atrocious to all senses as Versailles and the rotten vile cunt Kamijou; it's all supposed to be about dumb vampires holding up in former nazi SS-training castles in Bavaria and drinking blood from the ugly virgin girl's vein-covered anorexic necks.

[piyokolove]

No, worst as in it is still full of numerous grammatical errors and some sentences do not even flow together. Though if we want to talk about the theme, then yes, this is lumped in there with the group. I understand the genre of graphic humor, but this is bordering a very fine line between what is enjoyable and what is just plain disturbing.

And if you think Versailles is atrocious then why read about them?

[xlovelesslukax]

I like to imagine bad things happening to them, naturally, why else?

Disturbing to you, maybe; but you are a tasteless ingrate.