Faustian Hopscotch Chap 5

Sep 11, 2012 16:51

Title:Faustian Hopscotch
Author:Calamityjim
Fandoms:Supernatura/SGA
Rating: Mature
Warnings: Supernatural-Spoilers to season 5, SG-1, to season 9, and SGA, all seasons. Also Violence, swearing, pairings, sexual content, and aliens
Disclaimer:Stargate belongs to MGM, Supernatural to the CW
Distribution: Crossposted on fanfic.net

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calijirl5150 September 11 2012, 23:15:35 UTC
Loved this update !!! You have all of the "voices" down perfect. From when Ronon told John " I'm with Sam", ( I could just see the steam coming out John's ears;p) to "Where the hell is Dean?".

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calamityjim September 17 2012, 22:42:20 UTC
Thanks! It's been a rollercoaster and while since I wrote, so I was worried.

Thanks for the review!

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gypsy_atavari September 12 2012, 04:51:18 UTC
Love this! The Winchester's awesomeness can't be hidden for too long. Sheppard's about to learn that nothing gets between Dean and Sam. And how awesome is it that Rodney's finally going to be exposed to Sam and find out he's really a geek - badass but a geek! :-)

I can beta if you like but depending on when stuff are sent, I'm not sure I can give you a fast turn over. :-) PM me if ever. :-)

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calamityjim September 17 2012, 22:43:30 UTC
Thanks, but someone already scooped the beta job. I do appreciate the offer and I'll keep you in mind if it ever comes up again. ANd yeah, next few chapters are going to be made of awesome.

Thanks for the review

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gypsy_atavari September 18 2012, 01:30:48 UTC
No worries re the beta thing. :-)

I am so excited for the next chapters. :-)

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kaylez4ever September 12 2012, 05:48:41 UTC
Ya!!! A new chapter!!!
You always leave me wanting more.
I can't what to see how this is going tot progress.

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calamityjim September 17 2012, 22:43:53 UTC
Neither can I ;)

Thanks for the review

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ferrous_wheeler September 12 2012, 10:40:32 UTC
Love the Sheppard pov, that Sam's made a friend with Chuck, that Dean pretends to be dumb, and Ronon is becoming Sam's other big brother. Phew - that's a lot! :) In short, great update and looking forward to more! Can Beta if you still need someone :)

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calamityjim September 17 2012, 22:44:46 UTC
Thanks for the offer and the review. I already found someone to beta though, but I'll keep you in mind if things change.

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Thank you fireflybanner September 12 2012, 13:25:48 UTC
I really enjoyed the characterizations of Chuck and Leroy: it's fun to see the brothers throughthe others' viewpoints. The turn of phrase is great. Your sense of humor just tickles.

I love this story.

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Re: Thank you calamityjim September 17 2012, 22:45:51 UTC
Thank you! Leroy was super hard to write, so I ma have stolen him and then gussied him up to fit with the military. I'm glad it worked out okay. :D

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