Three Supernatural Drabbles

Nov 24, 2009 16:14

I originally wrote these for a drabble challenge for spnland (go Team Castiel! :), but since the moderator announced that she is closing down the community for the time being, I thought I'd post them here.

Thanks to the fabulous kaylbunny for taking a look at the last one for me, and making sure it made sense enough to post. :)

200 words or less... )

fic, drabble, spn

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cali0623 November 24 2009, 22:34:25 UTC
Thank you! I think I liked the third one the best, if only because I really want Michael to be an angel-version of Dean. :)

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cali0623 November 25 2009, 01:07:55 UTC
Oh, I would love it. I think Michael being just as divided between his love for his younger, stubborn brother and his loyalties to his father would be so interesting to see the show explore. I really want to see more depth given to the other angels in general. Cas and Lucifer (and sort of Gabriel) have motives and feelings - we understand why they are doing what they are doing. I'd love to see the rest of the heavenly host have similar depth given to their characters. :)

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blue_flame88 November 24 2009, 23:10:40 UTC
These are wonderful!

I really like your take on Michael... and i can only invision him as JoeF now. Oo

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cali0623 November 25 2009, 00:53:34 UTC
Thank you so much! I really want Michael to be just as reluctant to hurt his brother as Dean is. I love the idea that neither of them want to do it, and are forced to choose between their love for their brothers and their father's wishes. :)

(And the thought of Joe threatening Zach... *shudders* XD)

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priestess_kaiba November 25 2009, 00:18:52 UTC
Awesome drabbles! :D I liked them all but the last one I liked the most! At first I thought it was Dean talking! You tricked me! :P

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cali0623 November 25 2009, 00:58:17 UTC
Thank you! The third one's my favorite too, but I wasn't sure if it was going to work. I'm so glad I was able to trick you! :)

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xmarie08 November 25 2009, 00:26:58 UTC
You posted them! They're really excellent. I love the way you play with the Michael/Dean parallel in number 3. Nice job subverting audience expectations.

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cali0623 November 25 2009, 01:02:08 UTC
I was going to wait, but when she announced that she was closing the community, I figured what the hell, and just decided to post them. :)

I'm glad you liked them. I really wanted to surprise the reader with Michael, but I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to pull it off. I'm so glad you thought it worked. :)

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kaylbunny November 25 2009, 07:40:11 UTC
I'm glad I got to read the first two! Poor Castiel and his guilt, he's really trying to give Dean a run for his money (and that's saying something). I like that you've shown Castiel's involvement in setting Lucifer free, especially since it's something they seem to have ignored in the episodes. And you already know how much I love the third one :D

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cali0623 November 25 2009, 23:05:20 UTC
I'm glad you liked the first two. :)

And thank you again for your help with the last one! I really wasn't sure I got my idea across, so having someone to bounce it off of really helped a lot. *hugs*

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kaylbunny November 25 2009, 23:22:54 UTC
Anytime hun, it was my pleasure *snuggles*

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