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[calicocoa]

Title: Jack O' Lantern
Author: Calicocoa
Rating: G
Setting: TF: Prime
Characters: Ratchet, Bulkhead, Arcee, the kids
Warnings: Some discussion of the Devil, God, and the Catholic Church through some lore with Halloween traditions.
Disclaimer: (c) Hasbro for characters

Summary: The 'Bot's get a little lesson in some of the history of Halloween.

A/N: Wow

Comments

[calicocoa]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[neverminetohold]

This is precious, really! I love your dialog, how it goes back and forth and is shaped out with descriptions of the charas movements/expressions/actions - that keeps everything in flow and forms a vivid picture

[calicocoa]

Thank you! I've always struggled with smooth dialogue so I tried extra hard with this one. If they ever brought in Prowl in TF:Prime I would just melt into a puddle of fangirl goo out of gleeful happiness!

[neverminetohold]

You're welcome ^-^ It's hard to imagine that you have problems with writing dialogue, reading this! But if you really feel that way, then the thing to do is reading this book: "Dialogue" by Gloria Kempton. It's the only one about creative writing that handles the topic well.

Yeah, I would melt too ^-^ He's so underrepresented in TF lately, it makes me sad T-T

PS: Just signed up for the Nov challenge over on tf_rare_pairing ^-^ Guess which pairing? *pokes at icon*

[calicocoa]

I will try and pick that up at my library when I get a chance! Thank you!

TF:Animated Prowl *was* pretty cool. I never got much into that continuation since I didn't like Sari that much... I kept thinking of Sailor Moon while watching that show...

Good luck on the challenge, I'll have to head over to that community and see if I get any nibbles from the plot bunnehs.

[calicocoa]

Thank you for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it.