Comments | calihak: Mission Revision

calihak

Mission Revision

May 07, 2003 20:37

I don't care if you choose to find my manner obscene ( Read more... )

Comments 4

tynanious May 7 2003, 20:49:12 UTC

Dun like much poetry, but that was good heather..

Interesting randysandom May 9 2003, 20:49:56 UTC

Overall I found your poem somber. But it conveyed a message that almost any one can relate to. I give it 9 out of 10; for originality and empathic content. Good Job!

Re: Interesting slybynature May 27 2003, 09:31:35 UTC

I was somber, what do you want from me? Heh.
-HaK

slybynature May 27 2003, 09:31:01 UTC

Thank you chico. *Hugs*
-HaK