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FIC: Monday (part 2)

Mar 26, 2013 08:28

Monday
Part 2

Back to Part 1Against his better judgement Peter acquiesced to Neal’s insistence that he didn’t need to visit the nearest emergency room. Spending the next few hours at Peter’s, though, was non-negotiable. Surprisingly, Mozzie agreed. More surprisingly he begged off joining them, saying he needed to secure or sanitize Monday ( Read more... )

character: mozzie, rating: g, genre: h/c, wordcount: 1000 - 4999, character: neal caffrey, character: clinton jones, character: diana, character: elizabeth burke, character: peter burke

Comments 12

kanarek13 February 26 2013, 14:19:07 UTC

Awww, truly awesome \o/ I was so hoping for something similar in canon, with Neal getting his a** handed to him because of insufficient backup (and no Peter :P). So, YAY \o/

Love it how you had El sticking to her decision at first but then immediately coming clean after realizing it was all getting out of hand :D

Aaah... RIP Monday :P Poor Moz, if it continues like that, he will lose the entire week :D :D :D

Wonderful story \o/ Love seeing new stuff from you. It's always a perfect addition to the whump lists :D

calis_1st February 26 2013, 14:40:34 UTC

Thank you, thank you! I really needed Elizabeth to see her actions had consequences. I miss the old Elizabeth and hope she comes back.

Yeah, poor Moz, but he said himself that he always has a back-up (although I can't imagine it's easy to find unused real estate in the city). :)

I'm so glad you liked this, and truly appreciate you're comments.

leesa_perrie February 26 2013, 15:08:12 UTC

since apparently the only one who couldn't access to Neal's tracking data was Satchmo

LOL! I can imagine Mozzie thinking this! But poor Satchmo, they really should let him join in with the whole tracking Neal fun! :)

Nicely done.

calis_1st February 26 2013, 15:33:11 UTC

Sometimes it concerns me that Moz is so easy to hear in my head... :)

Thank you so much for reading and for commenting.

izzie7 February 26 2013, 18:34:56 UTC

This was fun & a nice resolution of the whole Elizabeth-tells-Neal-to-lie scenario. Your voices were spot on!

calis_1st February 26 2013, 20:03:04 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm hopeful for a good resolution but I have low expectations. ;)

angelita26 February 26 2013, 19:33:40 UTC

Awwww! I loved this - the glimpse back at Neal and Moz's past and the current run from Pratt's men. It was awesome! I especially adored Mozzie's first aid and making sure that Neal got away to Peter's where he would be safe. Thank you for sharing!

calis_1st February 26 2013, 20:11:32 UTC

Thank you! Mozzie will always be there for Neal (in my world, anyway), even if it means letting the Suit take over once in a while. I'm so glad you liked this, and appreciate your comments.

melles76 February 26 2013, 20:09:09 UTC

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story! Despite Moz' odd behavior (most of the time) it's great to see that he truly cares about Neal and that he's willing give up one of his safe houses. Also loved all the other characters; El (finally) confessing in front of Peter about the lie; Peter trying to help and calling the Marshals off and of course he wouldn't hesitate to support Neal with the search (no matter what will happen). This was just great! I enjoyed every single line of it.

calis_1st February 26 2013, 21:20:21 UTC

I'm blushing :) I believe that Moz really does love Neal and Peter finally has faith.

Thank you so very much for the lovely comments!