Expanding Peripheral

[calitetra]

Alright, I'm gonna give it a shot. I'm going to try to expand Peripheral (my 10 minute play from playworks 2007, directed by the capable Robin, starring the amazing Katie, Charles, and Michael

Comments

[insanexflame]

I really don't remember enough specifics about the play to offer suggestions at this point, but I highly endorse this idea. That play feckin' floored me.

[anonymous]

The protagonist and roomate relationship was really something, I'd say visit that first and see if you can chuck out any more back and forth scenes there. Then again, there is a good deal of that already, isn't there

[huduvudu]

Bah, that was me.

[daflipp]

Ooh! That was a good play, definitely go for it