somewhere out there (the three inches and a star remix)

[thedavidremix]

Title: somewhere out there (the three inches and a star remix)
Author: aohatsu
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: yeah, none, really
Word Count: 6,524
Summary: He makes it to the ticket booth, and grabs at his identification card, swiping it through the display monitor where it records his name, age, occupation, and slides out a long blue ticket from the bottom when

Comments

[duckgirlie]

I love the sense of longing you captured in the first section.

[asweetdownfall]

alsdfmlasjfjdsfjdsl This is all kinds of perfect. Your David voice is amazing and I love all the sci-fi details *is a nerd* and of course the ending *_______* Looooooooooove.

AND YAY ALLISON CAMEO. :D :D :D

[celli]

Yay for not being over! So adorable.

[jehane_writes]

*flails* I was so excited to see that you picked Somewhere Out There! It's the story I like best on any given day (shh, don't tell the other stories!), and I adore what you did with it ;)

I especially love how you expanded on Somewhere's SF setting, without having to engage in boring exposition. The white plantations of Vega II, the Fiji 2 water, the aerial xenocuisine restaurants, "So this is the famous L.A.? I think I like it. Maybe we should buy a vacation home or something." I squeed when the terminology and details in Somewhere showed up: in-person, buying datastreams, David's music-student course, the natural coffee served at the shop David worked in. You made cute things with the band, and the huge concert experience, which (you may know?) I love to write and even more to read about

[fieryrogue]

I have all kinds of amazing love for this thing, gaaah. Seriously. Seriously. It has made my life. (I... really want pages and pages more of it. Yes.)

♥♥♥