sticks and stones (the but words are just reactions remix)

[thedavidremix]

Title: sticks and stones (the but words are just reactions remix)
Author: epicflailer
Rating: r
Warnings: swearing. (allusions to) sex. (badly minimally un-researched) subject matter. second person pov.
Word Count: 1223
Summary: he comes to you first.
Original story: archie inadvertently insults cook by odi-et-amo53
Disclaimer: this is a work of fiction. any similarity

Comments

[asweetdownfall]

afldsjfldsjfdlsjfldsj This is so twisted and amazing and IDEK. IT BREAKS MY HEART THOUGH. UGHHHH. Why so stupid, Cook. >:| I really love your dialogue and writing style - it's pitch perfect.

[epicflailer]

THANK YOU NIT. you are so lovely. <3

[boomingvoice]

oh. my. god.

HAHAHAHAAH

[boomingvoice]

I might cry, I'm so happy.

[epicflailer]

i might cry, YOUR FEEDBACK MADE ME SO HAPPY.

[boomingvoice]

"No," he says. "Tell me. I'm not what? Not good enough? Real enough? Him enough?"

When you falter, it's all the answer he needs.

"Dang it," he says, and you clench your jaw. "Sorry, I don't -- oh my gosh, this is awkward."

"David," you grit out.

"Sorry," he says, embarrassed but smiling. "Just - I'm always saying stuff like that, and, like, rambling a lot, but I don't usually--"

hands down most amazing part in this fic.

oh my gosh, you don't understand how delighted i am, mystery writer.

[boomingvoice]

I keep rereading it. EVERY WORD IS SO PERFECT AND GOOD AND WONDERFUL.