[fic thelittlebang]: On Some Idle Tuesday 2/2 - Criminal Minds/West Wing, Emily Prentiss/Kate Harper

Jul 16, 2009 08:23

Title: On Some Idle Tuesday
Author: calleigh_j
Fandom: Criminal Minds/The West Wing crossover
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/Kate Harper
Characters: various from both shows, but with a focus on the pairing
Rating: R
Warnings: none that I can think of
Spoilers: all aired episodes for both shows
Word count: 19,952
Disclaimer: the characters from both shows belong to ( Read more... )

fic: criminal minds, fic: the west wing, fic, fic: ficathons, fic: crossover

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infinitlight July 16 2009, 12:31:01 UTC
I freaking loved this. It's rare to find a 'relationship' fic that doesn't compromise the characters, and this really lets them shine through. (I don't know West Wing, but I do really like the character of Kate as written here (if that makes sense).)

I love the way you write Prentiss (yay!), I love the way you incorporate both characters' lives into their story, and I love this:

Can we do this? Are we strong enough? Will I hurt you like other people have hurt me? Will you look at me one day and forget why you love me?

so much I choked up. Beautiful.

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calleigh_j July 19 2009, 22:27:25 UTC
Thank you so much! I was really trying to keep in character and I'm so happy you think it worked.

Prentiss lives in my brain, so I'm always happy when people like how I write her.

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shatterpath July 16 2009, 13:32:02 UTC
This was really good! On a whim, I decided to read, because really, who can resist Kate Harper? Luckily, I've read enough CM fic to have a handle on Emily and they work well together. This piece read very honest, for lack of a better word. The progression of events, the keeping of secrets, the moments of honesty, all were lovely. Thank you for the lovely journey!

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calleigh_j July 19 2009, 22:29:42 UTC
Thank you! There really isn't enough Kate fic in the world so I'm happy to add to it. Glad you enjoyed it!

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bessemerprocess July 16 2009, 16:03:22 UTC
This fic made me so happy. It's just joyful in that quiet, content way of two people building a life together.

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calleigh_j July 19 2009, 22:30:44 UTC
Thank you! I was really going for that - no drama, no explosions, just how I think it would work between them.

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heart1e55m00mba July 16 2009, 18:01:56 UTC
Great fic! I loved how you brought their work lives into the relationship, the missed calls and emails were perfect. I also really enjoyed the slow building of their relationship from friends to something more. You handled the aftermath of the drunken night together really well. Totally loved this fic.

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calleigh_j July 19 2009, 22:31:36 UTC
Thank you!! I was a little concerned about doing the morning after the night before stuff, but I'm glad it seems to have worked okay.

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calleigh_j July 19 2009, 22:33:19 UTC
Comment fic! I heart this so much! I'm thinking about writing more in this universe and I think Garcia could definitely be awesome in it. And Margaret with LOLcats - I can totally see that!

Thank you so much for all your help - I think I would've just given up without it!

Also, your icon is *gorgeous*.

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racethewind10 July 20 2009, 02:44:29 UTC
LMAo ok, that was awesome! omg I can just HEAR CJ yelling :)

Awesome!

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