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Aug 27, 2009 23:32

Title: Pove’s promotion party ( Read more... )

fanfiction, montoya!challenge, pepsi

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booglebee August 28 2009, 00:53:19 UTC
Drunk Silvia is funny! I like her. Lol.
And jealous Silvia, even cuter.
Montoya is a lovesick puppy.
Thanks for writing! I liked this. :)

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calleighsgirl August 28 2009, 20:14:06 UTC
I think Silvia is adorable whatever state we put her in. :D

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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raven_bard August 28 2009, 02:24:20 UTC
*giggles* Ok so I giggled like a little girl from the moment Silvia went all drunk off her cute lil ass. But the images I had in my head of a drunk Silvia...*renewed giggle fit*

What an awesome take on how Montoya found out! So glad Silvia didn't have her gun on her...imagine her accidentally shooting the poor man in her state. Tsk.

Thanks for writing and posting this as promised! *hugs and hands you a candy bar* And there's nothing wrong with the way you wrote. You gonna write more? Please? Pretty please?

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calleighsgirl August 28 2009, 20:18:45 UTC
Thank you! :) *big sloppy bear hug*
Yes, he would have been really screwed if Silvia had any sort of weapon with her.

As I said: I'm trying to get back into it. So maybe there will be more. :)

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junebuggy01 August 28 2009, 05:36:58 UTC
I love this story girlie! *Nods* yup I did! I love the drunk Silvia, hot cutely hot funny she was! It made me laugh. I also loved that you brought up a convo with Silvia telling Lola about her and Pepa. They never really had the sisters have a convo of her coming out to her, but I think that they should have, so thank you!

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calleighsgirl August 28 2009, 20:20:38 UTC
You're right... I didn't even think about that. But that you say it... they really SHOULD HAVE shown Silvia telling Lola.

Thank you for commenting, that means a lot to me coming from you. :)

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calleighsgirl August 28 2009, 20:21:56 UTC
Thanks! :D
Yeah, how could anyone not love Lola? :)

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kiarcheo August 28 2009, 17:07:12 UTC
My entry version wasn't NC-17 neither, don't worry!

Drunk!Silvia was fantastic!

I'm glad your muse get back after the long absence and I hope she stays now.

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calleighsgirl August 28 2009, 20:25:50 UTC
Oh you're right! Well, I'm glad I'm not the only one. :D

I hope she stays to, maybe I'll have to put her in chains. :D

Thanks for commenting!( I forgot to comment on the second part of yours! *runs off to do that right now* )

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