Nicotine Confidence

[calli_wulffe]

I feel as if I’m wondering through the halls of a daydream. This echoing, silent emptiness an alien sensation to my ears in this place. This place where sunlight sprinkles over specks of suspended dust, turning the air to glittering gold. Waving a hand through the doldrum air I send the particles into an erratic frenzy, whirling and twirling in

Comments

[incuzepmama]

one thing i noticed...when you said "Behind him is the missing mob of the halls" i'm not sure if "missing" is the right word....because they're there but not, right?...i'd get a second opinion on that though...anyways, i really like it^^...the use of parenthesis and quotes works well..and yes it's weird, but it makes sense to me...if you make another draft, feel free to email it to me if you don't want to post it again

[anonymous]

i am the loser, the non livejournal user.
There's some spelling errorsor just something like "he" instead of "the".
The story or whatever it should be called is grand
i enjoyed it and wish i could make a brilliant comment about it, but i dont have that kind of talent
this was really really a splendid ditty and you are great with the descriptions, i could see it happening and (smell it too)the whole time
evol love

[calli_wulffe]

yeah spelling errors/grammatical errors should always be expected when I post stuff -.- no matter how many times I go through it there are always some that I manage to miss...and thanks ^_^