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Chapter Four: The Concert

Nov 22, 2009 07:24

Title: Calling a Truce: The Concert
Authors: destinyawakened and MJLS
Rating: PG-13
words: 8200
Pairings/Characters: Tony Stark/Bruce Wayne, Pepper Potts, JARVIS, random Oc's that aren't important
Summary: Tony's convinced Bruce to come to Malibu for a Concert... things could go terribly wrong.
Warnings: spoilers for Batman Begins, The Dark ( Read more... )

author: mjls, author: destinyawakened, fic, chapter four, rating: pg-13

Comments 5

darke_wulf November 22 2009, 19:07:50 UTC

"There's my boytoy wonder!!"

You guys couldn't resist, could you? ;-)

Another great installment. I'm really enjoying this piece. I thought it was an interesting choice to have Tony be the one angsting for once. I had been certain that Bruce would use Tony getting hurt as an excuse to push him away, but you guys completely surprised me. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

destinyawakened November 22 2009, 19:11:44 UTC

Bruce and Tony are the kings of angst. There needs to be a few levels for each other them. There's plenty of angst for Bruce two chapters from now.

I think Bruce not pushing Tony away was a lapse of judgment (because, really, shouldn't he?) but it'll work for the best. :)

dragonfly126 November 22 2009, 21:34:56 UTC

Good chapter! I love how Tony really wants to protect Bruce and has a hard time when he can't. I can totally see Tony going trying to protect Bruce.

hitokaji November 26 2009, 04:50:09 UTC

Ohh, what an intense chapter! I'm so glad that they're okay in the end though. Serious!Tony is somehow adorable. :)

Looking forward to the next part,hon.

golden_helikaon December 13 2009, 12:27:08 UTC

Aww, the end was sweet.