Chapter Six: Shouldn't Have Come

[destinyawakened]

Title: Calling a Truce: Shouldn't Have Come
Authors: Destinyawakened and MJLS
Rating: pg-13
words: 6800
Pairings/Characters: Tony Stark/Bruce Wayne, implied Joker/Bruce, Alfred, Dick Grayson
Summary: Bruce becomes unsure of his status with Tony;

Warnings: spoilers for Batman Begins, The Dark Knight, and Iron Man
Disclaimer: We don't own or

Comments

[darke_wulf]

Loved this chapter! It's great to see the Joker being his usual psychotic self. I did find the transition between Bruce pushing Tony away and Bruce making back up with Tony to be a little sudden, though. It would have been nice to perhaps have gotten a self-reflection scene where Bruce realized what a bastard he was being…

A great chapter overall, though. Can't wait to see how things develop.

[destinyawakened]

Ah, yeah . I do agree with that... After looking at it for three months I didn't really notice that until today *sigh* (maybe I can add something to the next chapter about it... hmmm.)

[tattooedraven]

I have to say you are a trooper for continuing this series for which I applaud you for! I'm loving every chapter so thank you!

Even if Bruce was being awfully prickly and a jerk instead of Tony.

[destinyawakened]

Well, even Bruce has his moments of being a down right prick. There's a lot of mood shifts in this series, so he won't really be that way for long once he starts getting used to Tony. He's being a jerk cause he has to be? Yes, we'll go with that.

There's no really turning back with this series because we've pre-written twenty-three chapters so far, totally 100,000+ words... so we'll be posting for a while!

[tattooedraven]

Twenty Three chapters?!!! Whaaahooooo! :DDD

Even if reading this tiny tiny yellow text is hard on old folks eyes like mine own, it's worth the eye strain. ^_^;

[destinyawakened]

Yeah, we're a little nuts.

Is it that hard? I've been trying to make it bigger but no matter what the layout seems to hinder it from looking good. Maybe to go search for a new layout...

[maywoodfarms]

I always look forward to these new chapters and you never fail to fully grab my attention away from whatever I was doing just so I can finish reading each chapter right then and there. On pins and needles looking forward to the next installment!

[destinyawakened]

Well now until Christmas we'll be posting twice a week, because we need to catch up to the Christmas chapter! So yay for everyone!

Thank you for reading!