fic: a better fuck (than any boy you'll ever meet), cesc/raúl

[callings]

Uh, I would try and explain this, but I'm pretty sure it's unexplainable. I was originally going to write Cesc/Xabi, but when it came to write the first sentence with names. Well. This is what came out. I'm surely some kind of deviant.

a better fuck (than any boy you'll ever meet)
cesc/raúl, one night in spain. (adult, 2,236 words.)

Comments

[windsor]

lkjls;skd;g - i'm so sorry i didn't leave a comment earlier, because i had read it and was trying to mull it over (aka, NOTHING ADEQUATE TO SAY). :( because, really, i generally have nothing meaningful to say in the face of your writing, and this was no exception? there would be nothing i'd want to change about this anyway, you do such a fascinating job with these two characters, truly. so, again: i suck, and you are fantastically talented.

[callings]

Oh, don't worry about it! It takes me so long to get around to commenting people and their fic that I can't really say anything about it. But thank you, a lot. When you like something I write I'm always especially flattered because your writing leaves me in awe. So, um, you do not suck. At all.

[miman]

The pairing is unusual, and disturbing, to say the least, but then, you incorporate the immensely disturbing elememts so beautifully into the push/pull of the story, the shift in the balance of power. Cesc is so vivid, so changeable, so wild and out of control and so provocative somehow, kisses sweet, yet seducing Raul, with the mastery of a rare strength. And there is a sense that something else is happening in the background, there is a story behind this story...intriguing and like a bonfire...all glorious and mysterious.

[callings]

I'm really pleased you liked it, especially since it is such a strange pairing and obviously not the most conventional. I don't even know where it came from, acutally! But thank you, I appreciate the lovely comment. :)

[miomeinmio]

It's hard to comment on this story. I feel like I need to say something intelligent, but at the same time, I want to melt into a pile of mush and babble about how hot it was.

Because, lets face it, with all the underlying whispers you wrote some pretty hot fucking sex.

It's a strange pairing, but having a sort of lolita-type Cesc is absolutely how I imagine him. I am really very very impressed by how you wrote this and you having the idea to write this and actually doing it and I am extremely jealous I can't write like this.

[unembraced]

That was so hot. *fans self*

Strange pairing but it worked. I can see it, the irony of Cesc's maturity and still being so young, like he is on the football field. This is awesome.

[andolinn]

This is absolutely gorgeous. I'm not even sure how to describe it. You've taken pwp and made it so much more. The word choices are lush and luscious, you've intricately woven motivation and dilemma into it and I love the flow of power back and forth between the two of them. Cesc young, but neither innocent nor debauched.

And this is the kind of story where I'm sure my comment will change when I've read it three times and peeled back the layers.