Loving the bizarre parallel universe style of their conversation, plus the contemporary references (Mary Whitehouse!), plus Some Like It Hot references, and "huuuuge... tracts o' land."
“Don’t be silly, why would I have a pair of bolt-cutters?” asked Graeme, reprovingly. “I haven’t needed them since I started carrying my pocket oxy-acetylene torch.” Of course he does!
Whatever birds had not been fast or intelligent enough to escape Bill’s dedicated stalking *snorfle*
And you even managed a "that's what she said" joke!
Attempting to put in contemporary references for a show which was on TV before I was born is something I found surprisingly tricky :S Thank goodness for ISIHAC, feeding me Cyril Smith jokes for when I need them most!
:D :D I did that. And couldn't find any. Which forced me to write some, because really, *how can no one else see that their love is so true*? (and interspersed with cross-dressing.) Glad you enjoyed it!
I used to be a devoted T/B shipper, but your fic has definitely made me realize the T/G potential - and oh, what potential! The characterizations are absolutely spot-on as well. As another reader has already pointed out, it was like something straight out of the series. Brava!
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Tim whimpered, quietly.
LOL.
And the daisy-chain bit, and the Ms Whitehouse bit, and the grandchildren bit, and...oh, every bit is loltastic.
*runs off to part 2*
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Loving the bizarre parallel universe style of their conversation, plus the contemporary references (Mary Whitehouse!), plus Some Like It Hot references, and "huuuuge... tracts o' land."
“Don’t be silly, why would I have a pair of bolt-cutters?” asked Graeme, reprovingly. “I haven’t needed them since I started carrying my pocket oxy-acetylene torch.”
Of course he does!
Whatever birds had not been fast or intelligent enough to escape Bill’s dedicated stalking
*snorfle*
And you even managed a "that's what she said" joke!
*bundles self off to Part Two*
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Glad you've enjoyed it so far ^__^
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Oh, yes!
And the whole section about marriage rights is just pure genius, as well as there being constant giggles throughout. Very well played.
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