Ships: Arthur/Cobb, Arthur/Phillipa (one-sided), Eames/Phillipa Rating: NC-17 Summary: She flushes when her father calls them 'dates', but Mr. Arthur doesn't seem to mind.
Oh, I think this is my favorite of all the stories you've written. Love the hints at Cobb/Arthur, love Eames's flirtation, love how Phillapa is flawed and still sympathetic. Going straight to my bookmarks.
I'm glad that I was able to pull of an OFC. I always get nervous about writing characters that aren't in cannon or are, though we know nothing about them. I don't want to be the sock that does around writing Mary Sues.
Wonderful job. I love your Eames and I think Phillipa is also pretty amazing - she's so innocent and so teen and so not both of those at the same time. And Arthur is... well, Arthur. I'll wait impatiently to see where this goes.
I'm glad that they're so in character. As I've stated before, I wanted to not write a sucky semi-OC, and I'm glad I seem to have succeeded. The next part will be out sometime in the next few days, possibly even as early as tonight depending on my workload for class.
Yay. \o/ But don't hurry - we'll have patience to wait, if it is as good as the first part. (Oh, I just realized that might sound a bit stressing. But don't stress either, I guess I'll like it anyway.)
It looks like it might be Thursday night before I finish part II, though part III will a couple days after that. Hopefully it will live up to your expectations.
I loved, loved the way you portrayed everyone here. Especially Eames, not sure why, but you've totally made him so endearing to me here. This is lovely and I look forward to the next part!!
Okay seriously? I was apprehensive about this pairing cause Phillipa's still a little girl in my head. But oh my God, this fic. Is wonderful. Do want more. Do want. D:
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