Comments | callmetofu: Secrets and Lies (Michael/Lisa, Lincoln/Lisa, PG-13)

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Secrets and Lies (Michael/Lisa, Lincoln/Lisa, PG-13)

Mar 03, 2008 01:35

Title: Secrets and Lies
Author: callmetofu
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Michael/Lisa, Lincoln/Lisa
Disclaimer: Not Mine
Beta: Unbetaed

( I need to see your brother. )

Comments 4

etherealflaim March 3 2008, 02:53:03 UTC

Aww, poor Lisa.

I can see so strongly in this fic the Michael that ends up being the uber-successful urban professional who finally finds out that his brother paid his way through college by throwing away his own life and who goes to the ends of the earth to save him. It's so apparent both how much he loves his brother and how realistic his perception of him is, as well as how cold and calculating his mind can be.

*shudders*

Well done!
~EF

callmetofu March 3 2008, 07:00:31 UTC

Hehe. Looks like I should have added what happens next. :)

I haven't really been able to comment much lately. My head is filled with writing and beta work. But I really like your fic and your comments. May I add you?

etherealflaim March 3 2008, 07:47:31 UTC

I would be honored =)
~EF

foophile March 14 2008, 20:33:55 UTC

*smacks my forehead hard* OH, okay. Totally ignore the comment I had BEFORE I read this on the "after" portion of this story! Some of my earlier questions(about the anger and molestation) still remain but from Lisa's point of view this seems so much sadder. Poor...all of them! I love how Linc just steps up and doesnt even seem to think about what he has to do for his brother. And the little feeling of mourning between then at the end when they both realise that they've just essentially given up their dreams - it's heartbreaking.

You break my heart so well, callmetofu! Never stop. ;)