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calypso_63

Fic: You Don't Know (How Young You Are)

Nov 30, 2011 08:40

Title: You Don't Know (How Young You Are)
Characters/Pairing: Cesc Fabregas/Victor Valdes
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I made this up.
Word Count: 3,183
Author's Note: I wish more of this pairing existed... here's my attempt at promoting them. University AU; although Victor & Cesc are strangers when they become roommates, things soon start to evolve ( Read more... )

fic, au, victor valdes, slash, cesc fabregas

Comments 9

winter_solstice November 30 2011, 11:42:31 UTC

Angst is so bitter-sweet! Love it!

calypso_63 November 30 2011, 19:46:54 UTC

thank you, glad you enjoyed it!! :)

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calypso_63 November 30 2011, 19:43:33 UTC

Right? There SO needs to be more Cesc/Vic out there!! Ahh, that's just what I was aiming for with the angst - thank you dearly for the kind words, so glad you felt that way! :)

the_beanster November 30 2011, 17:14:39 UTC

So, I've never read this pairing and I was a little hesitant, but omg, this was amazing. I love the characterization and the small progression in their relationship. And the writing was just phenomenal. I loved it.

calypso_63 November 30 2011, 19:38:42 UTC

Ohhh thank you so much, really! So glad you felt that way - they really are a great pairing!! :)

kitty69lover November 30 2011, 19:21:27 UTC

i loved this, how you paced it and both their characterizations.

i love how cruel Vic can be and how accepting Cesc is and all the gorgeous angst, that you wrote to well. i love how hard it is for Vic to accept this relationship and his feelings for Cesc and how carefree Cesc only seems to be about it.

on facevalue, it seems Cesc only loves to fuck and Vic is the serious one. perhaps i'm reading too much, but at times i felt it's the other way around. and that Vic is the shallow one.

i also ADORE the entrapment Vic feels, when in reality, he is just afraid.

superb piece and my god, the title is inspired or what! [and it was your idea to begin with, i shouldn't get credited lol]

and yes, the writing is so intense, so tragic, idk. very fitting to the pairing. i love this pairing now.

:-*

calypso_63 November 30 2011, 19:35:45 UTC

Ahhh! :DD Okay, so - I was trying to let their actions speak for themselves, without doing any explaining/much insight on Victor's revelations, so I guess it does take some reading into - mostly I was just letting the fic take me where it would, it wasn't exactly planned ( ... )

baronessbadger December 1 2011, 05:17:17 UTC

Ohh, I really enjoyed this more than I thought I would. I'd love a sequel. ;)

calypso_63 December 3 2011, 17:21:36 UTC

Oh, don;t know about a sequel but thank yoooou, so glad you liked it!! :)