hc_bingo // Prompt: Wild Card

Jul 03, 2010 13:07

Title: Round Here
Pairing: Brendon Urie / Ryan Ross
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Brendon finds Ryan on the roof.
Warnings: Main character death/suicide [non-graphic].
Disclaimer: I don't own Panic! at the Disco... That is Pete's job!
Beta: edap. Also read over by charlie_100 and eastdisease. ♥
Word Count: 524
A/N: For hc_bingo. Wild Card Prompt. Inspired by the cover of Round Here sung ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pairing: brendon/ryan, fandom: p!atd

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williamsaporta July 4 2010, 12:41:01 UTC
I literally cried.
There were tears rolling down my face by the time I finished this, but I had to cover it up because I was in the kitchen and my grandma just walked in...
I hate yet love this! I just hate that Brendon was so sad and he has to watch that dream over and over.
<3

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camatie July 4 2010, 13:03:29 UTC
Aww, I'm sorry I made you cry! But at the same time I'm glad that this was powerful enough to evoke some emotion, even though you had to hide it from your grandma.

Thank you so much! ♥

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moonlightmania July 4 2010, 16:20:23 UTC
Aw! This was so sad! =( But it was still a great read. The description was short and sweet, the perfect balance between giving the image and letting the reader have free reign. Great job! :D

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camatie July 4 2010, 22:36:12 UTC
Thank you so much! I was trying to not be overly descriptive just for that purpose. :)

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x_rydenlover_x July 4 2010, 22:16:15 UTC
“Every night, I see him jump off that roof. How many times do I have to see it before I have enough sense to catch him?”

That line just kills me everytime..
I loved it,though.
<3

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camatie July 4 2010, 22:40:19 UTC
I think that is one of the most favorite lines I've ever written.

Thank you so much. ♥

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the_best_wishes July 5 2010, 04:55:20 UTC
I made the mistake of reading this in the living room despite ya know, the big fucking warning that someone's going to die. (I'm an idiot.) I definitely did the whole big stupid gasp/sob and cried a little. My roommate is gonna think I'm insane.

“Every night, I see him jump off that roof. How many times do I have to see it before I have enough sense to catch him?”

^that hurts so much every time I read it. It's really pretty and sad and I really feel for Ryan in this.

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camatie July 5 2010, 20:07:29 UTC
Everyone seems to be doing that! And you're not an idiot, if I was in your position, I wouldn't want to move to my room from the living room with all my computer stuff for a 500+ word fic, even if someone was going to die.

Awww! I'm sorry I made you cry though!

Thank you sooooo much! ♥

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truthtruthlie July 5 2010, 07:43:54 UTC
oooh so short!!!! so beautiful.

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camatie July 5 2010, 20:08:27 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥

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