Fix these, they dont sound right

Mar 09, 2006 02:27

If I gave you pretty enough words ( Read more... )

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The right lyrics (without repeats) fingrcuffmylove March 9 2006, 20:36:40 UTC
If I gave you pretty enough words…
could you *paint* a picture of us that works…
an emphasis on function rather than design…
aren’t you tired cause I will carry you, on a broken back
and blown out knees, I have been where you are for a while….
Aren’t you tired of being weak?
Such rage that you could scream…
*All* the stars right out of the sky
And destroy the prettiest starry night…
every evening that I die… I am exhumed just a little less human, *and alot more* bitter and cold…
after all these images of pain, have cut right thru you,
I will kiss every scar, and weep you are not alone…..
then I’ll show you *the* place in my chest where my heart still tries to beat…
aren’t you tired of being weak?
Such rage that you could scream…
*All* the stars right out of the sky and destroy the prettiest starry night…
every evening that I die
live love burn die

I put *'s next to the stuff I fixed :)

Rob

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Re: The right lyrics (without repeats) camelfuker March 9 2006, 23:05:35 UTC
k, thx

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