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Momo. (Part 1)

Sep 14, 2013 21:20

Author: amarie-authiel
Title: Momo.
Rating: G
Pairing/s: None.
Character/s: Merlin, Mordred
Summary: Reason says he cannot win. His heart knows he has to fight.
Warnings: Missing person, family issues.
Word Count: ~190
Prompt: #75 Foolish
Author's Notes: I wanted them to have cute nicknames. And then it got a bit sad and bit fluffy.

( It had been a hopeless fight from the start. )

*c:amarie_authiel, c:merlin, rating:g, type:drabble, pt 075:foolish, c:mordred

Comments 14

candymacaron September 15 2013, 02:25:04 UTC

Ohhh a custody battle? 0_0
Merlin sounds like an excellent dad. Very cute.

amarie_authiel September 16 2013, 12:08:18 UTC

Merlin does his very best, I'm sure. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

osky291 September 15 2013, 03:29:38 UTC

The feels! And the nicknames! Very sweet! And a bit sad but thats okay :)

Very well written!!

amarie_authiel September 16 2013, 12:09:53 UTC

*blushes* Thank you!

47eleven September 15 2013, 04:08:22 UTC

Very good stuff!

amarie_authiel September 16 2013, 12:10:39 UTC

Very happy writer! :D

aeris444 September 15 2013, 19:36:40 UTC

That wasn't what I was expecting but it's really interesting! And poor Merlin! But I'm sure he'll find a way to keep Mordred!

amarie_authiel September 16 2013, 12:11:46 UTC

I hope so. Merlin is good at doing impossible things.

brunettepet September 16 2013, 18:27:59 UTC

Intriguing set up. Merlin's been a devoted dad for six years. That's got to count for something even against the Pendragons' money.

amarie_authiel September 17 2013, 07:32:13 UTC

It better have!

Hmmm... I now have a very clear image of who Merlin's legal representative might be. Perhaps I might expand on this later.