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Sounds in Silence, Stories in Signs for tourdefierce

Nov 13, 2010 01:51

Title: Sounds in Silence, Stories in Signs
Author: vivitchi
Rating: NC-17
Genre(s): romance
Word Count: ~2380
Pairing(s) / Character(s): Arthur/Merlin, Gwen/Lance, Morgana, Morgause, Will
Warnings / Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: I do not own Merlin
Summary: In which Arthur is a heartbreaker in denial, Morgana is a latent alcoholic, and Merlin wasn't always ( Read more... )

round #2, vivitchi, tourdefierce

Comments 23

shiny4love November 13 2010, 02:08:12 UTC

Oh this was so lovely. Oddly its the second death Merlin fic I have read tonight.

I wonder why this fandom always makes Merlin the death one? I don't think I have ever seen one where Arthur is the death person.

Anyway I loved the pacing of this how you got so much in with so few words. It was quite and soft and made my heart ache a little in that good way :)

obscure_blues November 13 2010, 03:49:22 UTC

Great, lovely & sweet story I agree with you - bravo to the writer.. But I think you mean deaf, he can`t hear - he is NOT dead/death.. :)

shiny4love November 13 2010, 10:56:29 UTC

Christ I'm a twat, in my defense it was 2.30am and I was VERY tired :)

obscure_blues November 14 2010, 01:55:01 UTC

Hey it can happen to us all :)

Live Long & Prosper....

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myworldmytrue November 13 2010, 02:57:25 UTC

Oh, this was utterly lovely! ♥

tourdefierce November 13 2010, 03:01:00 UTC

Oh! This is lovely! Thank you so much.

I adore Arthur and Morgana's first conversation in the kitchen because of how full of playful, sibling tension there is. They are almost fighting, just on the tip of pissing each other off. It's fabulous.

Merlin typing away on his iPad (which is named Archie, apparently: LOL. YES.

But that goes right out of the window, all conviction forgotten, when Merlin finally begins to play. HIS HANDS. OMG HIS HANDS. NOMNOM.

The silence is deafening - and yes, Arthur knows it's ironic, he really does - to the point where he gets so flustered, he finally blurts out, "I like you. A lot.": Arthur's a twat and I kind of want to put his face in my boobs.

OH AND YES. I LOVE IT WHEN MERLIN TALKS AND THAT WHOLE SCENE IS LOVELY. I LOVE THAT HE STARTS TO TALK MORE AND THAT HE MOSTLY TALKS DURING SEX BECAUSE THAT'S... WELL, THAT'S HOT.

"My wish is your command," he mouths silently, and thrusts in to the sound of Merlin moaning a filthy litany of Yes, yes, fuck me, yes. This switch up is lovely ( ... )

shes_gone November 13 2010, 16:14:43 UTC

aaaaah, this is adorable! <3 <3 <3

archaeologist_d November 14 2010, 01:03:06 UTC

That was lovely. I really enjoyed how Arthur was learning to sign and how he thought he had too much baggage at first. Well done