TRON:Legacy Clu/Tron(Rinzler); Pretty When You're Mine

[camesawconquerd]

Title: Pretty When You're Mine
Series: TRON:Legacy
Author: camesawconquerd
Pairing: Clu/Rinzler
Rating: R I think but NC-17 if you're squeamish
Word Count: ~6,000
Spoilers: Hope you've watched the movies. If not what are you doing here D: ?
Warnings: Dubcon like nobody's business. Abusing Asimov's laws of robotics. Some not-nice touching. Program abuse. Cherry

Comments

[mochisquish]

I liked the laws as the concept for this fic. You did well expressing the complexity of CLU and Tron's relationship and it all pulled together at the end when it becomes obvious what Tron considers "servicing." Naughty, Kevin and Alan. I'm sure there was other work you should have been doing. ;P

I always melt with circuit play. It's so sensual and delicious. This turned out a bit more depressing than expected but I enjoyed that extra layer.

[camesawconquerd]

Whew! I'm glad the Laws worked for people as I was kind of stoked on the idea and then wasn't sure it would translate for everyone or be very appealing. Yaay it worked!

Naughty, Kevin and Alan. I'm sure there was other work you should have been doing. ;P

Well ending world hunger was taking a while so they had to occupy themselves somehow xD

Circuit play is my faaaavorite thing to come out of the Tron fandom :3 And yes, it came out a bit sad there at the end but I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thank you so much for reading!

[dislex1a]

Wow. This is fantastically creepy and disturbingly hot. I love the inclusion of Asimov's Rules (well, your interpretation of Asimov's rules which makes it even better!), and the suggestions of Tron's earlier relationships with Kevin and Alan. Something about the mention of both of them felt very tragic to me, and I loved how Tronzler eventually turned his greater experience of Users against Clu, despite being under Clu's control. And the Stockholm Syndrome angle was beautifully done. Seriously I have not seen many fics that handle that turn as gracefully as you have here.

This really took me by surprise, thanks for sharing!

[camesawconquerd]

I had a really fun time working around the Asimov Rules and I'm really excited you guys enjoyed that :D!

Guh! I feel so ineloquent right now since I've been at work all day but you've really said a lot here that just- yes. Yes a thousand times yes! I really wanted it to be kind of tragic where both of them were hurt in their own ways and trying to make something out of the situation.

And I was super super worried about the Stockholm thing so that was a high compliment that made me squeal a little. Thank you so so much for reading and commenting!

[cryspeaches]

This is amazing, really well done, and very elegant in the overarching plot, as well as being heart achingly beautiful, and still amazingly hot. Kudos, and thanks for sharing! <3

Looking forward to whatever comes next from you!

[camesawconquerd]

Thank you for reading and commenting! Really glad that people liked this and the comment about the "elegant ... overarching plot" and "heart achingly beautiful" just makes me kind of melt into my writer shoes. You guys are amazing and I'm very happy you enjoyed this.

I can't wait to answer the next prompt I found!

[fahrenheit_f430]

Thank you for answering my prompt, and disturbing me GREATLY. O.O You've nailed it again. Giving Clu the same kind of innocence as a child who's never been told not to pull the legs off spiders was SPOT ON! How the hell did you get that from the prompt, really?

But Tron-Tronzler-Rinzler? Dude, seriously, I am now scared of EVERY incarnation! AND I can't go look at pics of Boxleitner to take my mind off The Scary 'cause he's THE IMAGE of The Scary. *gulp*

In short, thank you for Being Awesome. Again. With bells on. *squish*

[camesawconquerd]

A seriously died laughing at having picked TWO of your prompts. I've got a third prompt I'm looking at and now I'm wondering if it's yours too!

And I said it over there at the meme but I'll say it here too. You write a great prompt with just enough information to get me going but not so much that I feel consumed by strict rules to write under. There's a lot of room for flexibility but the specifics you give are just *too* perfect to not write!

Writing Clu as an intelligent and yet not exactly worldly program was really a pleasure; like the old book smart vs common sense thing. I had so much fun with this despite it being really outside my normal genre of writing.

No matter what you say it was a phenomenal prompt! And while I do feel bad for disturbing you, it was what you asked for so I'm sort of glad it fulfilled that end!

And hey, I'm writing a Sam/Alan||Alan/Sam next so maybe that will make Boxleitner a little less scary to look at ;)

Bah! It was my pleasure dahling. *squishes back*

[fahrenheit_f430]

It is SO uncanny it's actually hilarious. XD 2 fics, 2 prompts, same 2 people, one meme with 8000 comments to choose from. XD If it is one of mine, I'll greet you with a virtual martini instead of a 'WHAT.' 'cause, omg, this is too funny. :X

[camesawconquerd]

Well regardless of if I pick one of yours or not I hope you like the next one all the same xD! Alan/Sam!! I was thinking of writing it as a psuedo-sequel to the one I wrote for your first prompt. I mean, after all, Alan did say "another night" >:D

Well it absolutely works because so far both of your prompts have been phenomenal to write and your comments are like life blood, bro. I am high-fiving you over the distances of the internets right now. Also I have to admit, at your breakdown of the relationship dynamics at work I was just straight up *chin hands* because yes yes YES. I think that's what I really loved about this, was that it wasn't a traditional take on the pairing but rather a very realistic alterna-take. I love, love, love that you wrote this and even though I was super nervous about writing it I'm kind of pleased with the outcome. Clu as being ... well... pardon it all... clueless was such a novel take and it's true. I mean after watching the first Tron there's kind of a strange divide between Clu and Tron and when

[centerspire]

O.O

*blink blink*

You were right about the last three lines. I am destroyed.

\o/

[camesawconquerd]

Please turn out the light.

I'M JUST SAYING IT'S THE BEST LINE EVER AND I HAD TO DO IT.

Did you find the line from The Last Unicorn?

*smug Clu face*

AS REQUESTED...

[centerspire]

STOCKHOLM SYNDROME MEETS CHEEZ-IT SCRABBLE

Re: AS REQUESTED...

[camesawconquerd]

L.M.A.O.

DO YOU LOVE ME TODAY TRON?

HOW ABOUT TODAY?

NO?

OKAY WHAT ABOUT TODAY?

TODAY?