Comments | camilla_n: Stay With Me - An Edward/Bella Oneshot

camilla_n

Stay With Me - An Edward/Bella Oneshot

Apr 27, 2008 16:38

Title: Stay With Me
Characters: Edward/Bella
Words: 2794
Authors note: Made as a challenge to the community
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couple: edward/bella, oneshot: stay with me, character: edward, character. bella

Comments 14

runawaycherie April 28 2008, 04:36:22 UTC

=(

That was so sad. It like pained me! But that was amazing. Great job.

train_lindz April 28 2008, 13:23:22 UTC

Oh, this was touching. Beautiful work - well done!

cglue April 28 2008, 14:14:56 UTC

God, that was beautiful. Bella and her emotions are so perfect. I think I'll cry if I read it again. You did a wonderful work with this one.

joyshadow April 28 2008, 17:51:50 UTC

Wonderful. Great job (Y)

scarlett71177 May 1 2008, 07:52:27 UTC

Nice job. I liked her emotions during the realization and the fact she'd awoken Charlie. I can just imagine him standing outside her door not knowing what to do.

Keep up the good work.