Fanfic: Advanced Genealogy (3/4)

[canadianiana]

Title: Advanced Genealogy (chapter 3/4)
Author: Canadianiana
Spoilers: I don't think there's any, but we'll say up to the hiatus just to be sure.
Ratings/warnings: PG-13? A bit of swearing, nothing scandalous. Oop, there's one lonely F-word in this chapter.
Summary: From a ficcy Friday prompt from tilie12, in which Jeff's mother shows up at Greendale

Comments

[temi713]

Wow you're not just a good writer, you're also a very kind person to update this so quickly. I am now realizing that my vocabulary is very limited. I don't even know how to describe my love for you, this story and this chapter in particular. You have made your fan club very proud. I loved reading Annie's POV. It was very well written, especially this part:

That's just an exaggeration.

"And I'm not exaggerating."

Great, now he can read my mind.

In short, you are awesome!

[canadianiana]

Thank you so much! I'm kind of breaking my own rule, and I started posting this fic before I had it completely done. So I'm doing my best to update the last part, but there might be a slight delay.

I'm glad you like the Annie POV! It was so tempting to show Jeff's as well, because I like showing different perspectives (a la my first fic). But it's been fun and challenging to get in Annie's head.

[temi713]

I loved Annie's POV because I'm kinda like her. I understand her more than the other characters for the same reason.

[crittab]

Man, this is just an awesome, awesome fic. I love every bit of it. I feel bad for Marilyn (although I don't like people guilt tripping Jeff, even when it's 100% deserved... I have a sickness). I love Annie's over-analyzing... you have both her and Jeff's characteristics down.

Great, great chapter. I'm anxiously awaiting the last one.

[canadianiana]

I absolutely LOVE your fics, so you saying mine is awesome is just... awesome. :D

I struggled with Marilyn's reaction... I didn't want her to be actively trying to guilt-trip Jeff, but I figured considering how hurt she'd be, some guilt trippy-type things might slip out.

So glad you liked it!

[nell86]

a cup of coffee, Ron Pope's album playing in the background and your fanfic was the perfect way to take a break from studying. thank you for that!!!

I can't wait for the final chapter and I love how you included the other members of the study group. Abed's opinion on this "lie" and, especially as a Troy/Britta shipper I am loving this, the meltdown Troy is having because of a "he" in Britta's life...so in character. Lovely work.

[canadianiana]

Thank you! I've recently hopped the Troy/Britta train as well (boarded the T/B ship?), so although I'm not as into them as J/A, I couldn't resist throwing that in.

[nyclove3]

[canadianiana]

Thank you!!! Last chapter will be up soon..... (she promises, vaguely....) ;)

[iknowitsbutters]

Just as it was easy to be as nervous as Jeff and Annie before the dinner, it was easy to be as relieved as they were that all turned out well - on the surface, at least. Bravo to Annie for bringing Marilyn back out, and to Jeff for actually finding a way to finally confess/apologize for a few things

[canadianiana]

I'm glad the tension and relief (such as it was) came through. I find it hard, because when you're writing it yourself, you know what's going to happen, so there's no suspense for you.

Oh, interesting! Without giving too much away, my ending will be quite different. I hope you like it!