Kink!fic: A Study In Claustrophilia

[canadianiana]

Title: A Study in Claustrophilia
Author: Canadianiana
Kink: Jeff and Annie get stuck in a cramped space. Things get heated. (Prompted by teruel_a_witch.)
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 3700
Author's (side) note: I will fill every prompt I have promised to, I'm just extremely slow at it. :)

Comments

[iknowitsbutters]

You set an extremely high bar for smut with the action in your earthquake story - so while that may not have been topped here, be assured that it was pretty damned close. And I assume you'll take more shots to set the bar even higher anyway.
Kudos for showing how even though this was in Annie's frantic, lust-fogged POV, it was still all too evident how Jeff was even more out of control than she was - which fits given the turns that S3 has taken. But at least he was back in control enough to do his usual "things he'd never do for anyone else with his clothes on" routine for the sweet ending.

[canadianiana]

Thank you! I will definitely be practicing and posting more smut, I just couldn't resist this prompt.

[ohmyohpioneer]

Ho. ly. Crap.

Yeah...I'm just gonna...go...or...phew. Wow. That. was. amazing. I'm supposed to be working from home this afternoon. This totally ruined that (in the best way possible). *Scrolls to the top again...*

[canadianiana]

:D Thank you! And... I'm sorry? Hehe.

[nyclove3]

[canadianiana]

Haha! Aww, thank you. More is always in the works. Always. Slow but steady ima keep writing these things until people stop reading them. :)

[stephanierb]

I was very pleased to see you had posted something. I had been missing your fics.

That was seriously hot. The close quarters combined with the mounting tension made for a pretty combustible situation. I love that Annie doesn't demur but instead gives right back. The intensity of that entire scene nearly melted my computer. lol

And I loved the follow up; Jeff getting both her phone and her necklace back for her by paying Chang. How could she not think highly of him? And of course, their easy interaction with one another in the aftermath. No awkwardness, no tension, just friendship finally becoming something more. Well done.

[canadianiana]

Thanks so much! Even with a kink meme fic, I can't leave things unresolved. I have a problem, I admit it. ;)

[xtiltawhirlx]

"Stupid Jeff and his stupid biceps"

Hahahaha that was so perfect. I've thought that about Jeff/Joel myself.

I'm so claustrophobic that even reading/seeing it freaks me out, but this time hot sexy times totally over rode that. (I'm not kidding, I used to freak out in the tubes at McDonald's play places)

[canadianiana]

Hee, thank you! I like that the show objectifies the men and women with equal opportunity. :P

Thank you for braving it to read it!! I'm actually claustrophobic too, oddly enough.