...i'll fall asleep tonight...because that brings me closer to you...

[canadianlover]

ok, here's that poem i promised...

Someone Who Isn't You...As I lay awake tonight

Comments

[chiana606]

that's a very good poem. The rhymes were well done. You know how sometimes, when people write rhyming poetry, it just seems horrible and forced? Well, yours didn't.

It was a very raw and emotional piece. If you wrote more poems, I'd definately read them.