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candice_j

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Feb 08, 2005 16:49

i wrote this poem for a person. lol. do i even have to explain about it? it's really long. you don't have to read it.

Just so you know/ This is my last poem to you/ Can’t believe I wasted 10 pages and 2 years/ The poems I wrote for you

When we first met/ I found something within/ It was your eyes and complete trust I saw/ That reeled my feelings ( Read more... )

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kiteeth February 8 2005, 23:55:54 UTC

I really almost did cry in class after reading.
Maybe you'll never know just how much I understand.

candice_j February 9 2005, 02:22:23 UTC

i skipped 2 periods in the bathroom just to cry. i can't see how i believed his lie. i guess it's touche from here. i did the same to him remember, sophomore year. but god oh this hurts way more than imaginable, i'm so heart broken my life is just not livable anymore. i hierarched him up so high in my april sky and now i've lost everything i took for granted the cost, was that i held him in my arms for awhile and now i gave him up, will he ever understand i'd do anything to hold me, my face his hands would cup. i listened to him cry to me and now i want him to listen to me but he is not there and nowhere near.

mew.. kitten_answers February 9 2005, 01:43:46 UTC

of course i got so many poems to go with that..heres two..self explanatory i hope ( ... )

Re: mew.. candice_j February 9 2005, 02:17:54 UTC

i can relate to the forever waiting part. i will always wait for him. i cannot help it. is that selfish? are those both for nitin? i loved them. i enjoyed the part of the crowded square and still being lonely.

its jesseman kitten_answers February 9 2005, 17:01:35 UTC

no not nitin, but i think i know who, but then again i might be wrong. erin, is it the white civic, green firebird drivin student of UF? isn't he gonna be a brain surgeon or something. anyways they're great and you know i think your another great poet. well -later

mew kitten_answers February 9 2005, 01:44:40 UTC

now..would you like to hear one that i wrote to nitin once???

Re: mew candice_j February 9 2005, 02:13:59 UTC

yes

the jesseman anonymous February 9 2005, 17:13:29 UTC

well damn its like a poetry corner here, so i decided to share a little something with everyone that you've heard a thousand times but others havent and it seems to me like it might apply to you a little more now sooo ( ... )

Re: the jesseman candice_j February 9 2005, 19:52:00 UTC

thank you jesse. i never realized how much that song related to me as well. it is beautiful. the piece that you couldn't find that i wanted you to read to me the other night that was my favorite poem of yours. i loved it. now i can take it more to heart.

Re: the jesseman kitten_answers February 9 2005, 20:38:43 UTC

wow i adore the last block of ryme...i totally have the same one..anyways..since the jesser is being all posty...i think its bout time YOU made a LJ....^_^

Re: the jesseman candice_j February 9 2005, 20:49:50 UTC

i agree. but he only comments at school. he'd have to post on LJ at school and would have less time. he should though

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hehe anonymous February 13 2005, 20:11:54 UTC

just because i dont have to read it doesnt mean i wont read it. if you took the time to type it, then i shall take the time to read your dilemas :/
love much haynie