Downtown Traffic Love Affairs

[candice_j]

the poem is boring at first and kinda out there and makes no sense but there are pieces to it that are really meaningful so just stick through it and comment.

Ran a red light/ broke my pillow/ lost the remote to the radio/ the music flowed from my window
 Flew down to the street to get downtown/ to see the city lights and commotion/ the     
 people

Comments

[kiteeth]

beautiful.
The whole bed thing was about me right?
lol but uhh hopefully friday night/saturday morning i'll be in your bed.
[smiles]
you're poems always make me cry...or close to it.

heh.

[candice_j]

see, i go emo in my poetry just for you.