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Hotel Dusk: Room 215 - Act II, Scene VII

Sep 06, 2007 22:15

Title: Hotel Dusk: Room 215
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Stevie/Xabi
Disclaimer: This is fiction! Not true! However much I wish, I don't own the players or Hotel Dusk.

( Chapter 7 )

hotel dusk

Comments 10

trainmad September 6 2007, 16:22:00 UTC

Wow! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
:D

gr3ymalkin September 8 2007, 06:55:19 UTC

Yay! Thanks for reading! ^^

nadi_wamos September 7 2007, 16:01:50 UTC

OHGOODGOD.

UPDATE. UPDATE UPDATE. I AM DYING HERE.

this is like, freaking amazing.♥

gr3ymalkin September 8 2007, 06:56:02 UTC

Hehe, thanks :) It's comments like yours that make me want to write faster! <3

indecencia September 7 2007, 22:41:53 UTC

Have read through all the chapters and this is seriously, seriously exciting XD

Looking resigned, Daniel decided to spill it all. “It was… Periko.”
I literally gasped when reading this part.

Keep it up, girl! ;)

gr3ymalkin September 8 2007, 07:01:37 UTC

Thank you! ^^

suerte_lina September 7 2007, 23:52:06 UTC

wow! I read all chapters in a row, and I can't wait to read the next part!
I find this story very interesting. I love the suspense, and I want to understand Xabi's reasons.
It's a fantastic fic! lol

gr3ymalkin September 8 2007, 07:03:18 UTC

Lol, that's gonna be a long wait (for Xabi's reasons), I'm afraid. There're other... complications involved and other characters in between xD

Thanks for reading!

crinury September 8 2007, 01:15:02 UTC

Lemme vent first: Weneedtoreadthenextchapterpleeeaaase!!!
*ahem*
Yup, another reader caught by the story XD. I saw Hotel Dusk in an arcade a couple of months ago, and only got to play it for ten minutes. Can't exactly say I was hooked (like you said, the story was a little tedious), yet something about the game stayed with me ever since.
And I find it all here in this fic, ten times better than in the game! The tone of the story, the pace, the intrigue, the way you insert Stevie's thoughts (is it just me or do they match the actual storyline?), everything just falls into place and - it becomes addictive o.O The characterization is great, the dialogues just sound real, and it's way, way, way too much fun to hunt for the next name-drop XDDD.
So I'll gladly feed you cookies if you were to post new chapters, but there's no rush - take your time and make it good ^^.
School's eating my life, so I won't always keep on top of updates, but this is definitely a story worth checking back for!

gr3ymalkin September 8 2007, 07:11:58 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment! <3

While the story in the game was great, there were some loose ends untied, and the plot was relatively thin, so when I decided to do a 'remake' of it, I spent three days trying coming up with an outline xD So I'm very, very glad you all liked it so far :D

Stevie's thoughts... It matches the storyline somewhat, but I added a bit more just to give it a little more depth. Like I said, the game plot was quite thin.

The dialogue... I relied mostly on the game's script so far, only for Steven, Daniel and Rafa, cos Raul and Finnan doesn't behave like Dunning and Rosa (original characters in the game) respectively. But it's gonna change soon cos my storyline's shifting from the game's :P