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Aug 05, 2005 13:27

so i just wrote a poem and it is on dA...woooo...i suck.

hey stop giving up on me ...i feel half alive ,blue and black , and not willing to

croperate. i hate this empty feeling but yet i don't know what i am missing to feel

empty inside.

i'm going to go chase nightmares.

i love you darlings.

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aluscioustree August 6 2005, 01:03:39 UTC
pretty...if you catch any nightmares tell me i want to see :)

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candyc0atedrazr August 6 2005, 15:33:04 UTC
yeah but thats not my poem

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aluscioustree August 6 2005, 21:03:13 UTC
aw whose is it?

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candyc0atedrazr August 6 2005, 23:22:39 UTC
the journal entry wasn't my poem it was just the way i felt yesterday..is what i put in my journal..

this is my poem...

Life has a price tag that reads full price but someday it may come to read reduced.

I feel so empty ,sometime half dead. My body is just another bag to drag around.

My smile is cricked because my day has been just the same. My dreams fall once they hit

the high note. Lies give me energy to make it though. All I wish for is someone to

notice that am I who I am and will never change. So dream on and chase those bloody

tears of shame. Hold on to the night as if it was your one true love.

ohk bye bye now

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aluscioustree August 7 2005, 15:40:12 UTC
oh..i'm a dummie. but the real poem is pretty too <3

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candyc0atedrazr August 10 2005, 18:25:00 UTC
thankie and no your not a dummie

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