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gryphons_lair in cannon_fic

Tertiary Character Fic

Oct 01, 2004 19:03

Another story in the Men Must Work Sparrington series.
Takes place between the prologue and the main movie.
PG for implied sexual violence.
( Chain of Command )

Comments 2

meletor_et_al October 1 2004, 19:38:27 UTC

... <3.

You've left me illiterate.
It's just so... nautical! And wonderful!

You put me to shame, of course, but what else is new.

Fab work, once as always. There's a polished professional touch to it, that is tough to find in the fanfic world.

Just the one little thing: Theog grinned suddenly. ...just that one typo.
I'm still memorizing this, though. Lovely.

gryphons_lair October 1 2004, 20:16:55 UTC

It's just so... nautical!

I owe the nautical bits to equal parts Patrick O'Brien and q_skud_. Have I pimped the latter's Sailing School For Slashers lately?

And wonderful!

Thank you!

You put me to shame, of course, but what else is new.

I really think you're exaggerating just a bit, there.

Not that I mind, necessarily.... :)

There's a polished professional touch to it, that is tough to find in the fanfic world.

For that, I get to (once again) thank commodorified, who does actually Edit For Money, and kindly donates her professional-level skills to smooth out all my rough edges. I think I clocked her at one major tweak every other sentence on this one.

just that one typo.

Actually, I already spotted at least 3 others. But I've given up frantically trying to keep multiple comm postings updated when I (inevitably) spot typos after the fact. I just fix the one on my LJ, which is the one that goes into Memories, and try to live with the others being less-than-perfect.