i've calmed down a bit. and had some cookies so i could you know. think about this. i really, really love the way you write. you can do angst, and do it well, and your crack is unbelievable. this was just. it was a mix of sad and happy and just... good. it was so easy to read, and i found myself sad that the tabs open were lessening as i went along. there are so many ways that this 'verse could be expanded, and i liked that you didn't explain everything from their pasts. (well, silva's past, mostly.) i like that cesc wasn't too crazy, but was still perfectly cesc-like in your characterization. and i liked that silva wasn't all quiet and acquiescing - i liked that he got indignant. and red in the face when mata called shakespeare will. i don't know, i really liked the kind of dorkiness you gave david, mostly because i could relate? is that weird? especially with all right. dude that is seriously my #1 pet peeve. i've given up on your/you're, and there/they're/their, but HONESTLY WHAT IS ALRIGHT. it's abominable how that knowledge has
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THIS COMMENT FEELS ME WITH MUCH NERDY GLEE, YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW. Your/you're isn't a big deal to me anymore. Even all right to some degree, just because people just don't know which is sad by itself, but I think most people are like Cesc in this fic? XD. My #1 pet peeve it loose/lose. THEY DON'T EVEN SOUND THE SAME!
And also. Thank you agaaaain. I was ????? writing about David feeling inadequate because I just wanted it to not come off sounding all cliched and cringe-y, so I am so glad you mentioned it. :D
Thank you! :D (Aww, everyone loves him, the problem he's too adorable? XD. Don't worry, I feel like this universe will never end and I'll probably write something for him.)
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OKAY, REALLY, I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. AND READ IT. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU. ♥
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And also. Thank you agaaaain. I was ????? writing about David feeling inadequate because I just wanted it to not come off sounding all cliched and cringe-y, so I am so glad you mentioned it. :D
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(What happened to Jack?!?!?!?! He just disappeared, poor Lonely Boy!)
LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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(Obviously he goes on a dating spree-- because who wouldn't want to date him?-- and he dates Aaron along the way, but he ENDS UP WITH THEO.)
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